Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crims of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays people are surrounded by myriad heinous assault and violence cases. The reason may be anything but offender can not leave without any punishment either in form of finance or prison. Some people believe that capital punishment are very less secure and nurture other crimes of violence while other people believe that death penalty play a pivotal role to control these violence cases. In this essay, I shall discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, people who understand that capital punishment is prone to crimes and violence and believe that there is increase in violence cases in the societies. They believe that offenders infringe every rules and provide evidence of innocence. They acquit from these offences as they don't fall in boundaries of laws. They get more open hands to levy the decision to do crime. People believe that fear of death do not cause any restriction on them and open their hands to crimes such as rape, assault, murder etc.
On contrary, people argue that capital punishment always a conspicuous penalty for offender. These people believe in rule and regulations and pursue all norms with discipline. In infringement or intruders found to across boundary of crimes get caught. For example in UAE middle-east, people do not indulge there-self in crimes. For any single pity crimes, there is death penalty direct. This death penalty provides a outlook for other people in form of fear of death and hence violence decrease.
In recapitulate, there are strong facts discussed for this argument. In my opinion, capital punishment always have a profound influences on violence and control all offences in societies. I recommended that regime any offender should not eschewed off and escape.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, may, so, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17708333333 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58196788511 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6973356587 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8333333333 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 2.75862068966 471% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248464665661 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747163685505 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872519964282 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162245581849 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431889824355 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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