We can learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every human is different from other people in terms of thinking and knowledge. There is a possibility that many people can contradict our view which we can present or rather support them. But in both of the cases, we got to learn some things which enhances our knowledge. Indisputably, if we put a wrong view to someone, then some people can definitely contradict them. In this case, they're also increasing our knowledge. Hence, Both positive and negetive contradictions enhances our knowledge since there is always some things to learn from them.
First of all, debate is the best way to know whether we are correct or not. For example, many people in their childhood age demands chockletes from their father. Then the father tries to convince the child about the negetive views of eating a chocklets like it can damage your teeth etc etc. Then the child learnt that chockletes are bad for health. There are numerous such examples which shows either contradiction with the view or support with the view, in any case, both enhances our thinking since our mind tries to convince the other about the impacts of the view. Moreover, in most of the political debates, leaders present their view and tries to convince the audience that why they're better than the other party. They slander each other in variety of terms. Then, the other party calumniates with their thoughts and tries to convence the audience about the fake information they're giving. This way people get to know the views of both the parties and give their votes to whoever they like. Hence, both the views are important for people to enhance their knowledge and come up to a decision.
Furthermore, since both the views important for consideration, positive views have sometives greater impact on our thinking rather than negative views. If someone contradicts our view then we are trying to convince them by giving explainations and try to defend our view. Or may be we can consider their view as a correct opinion. In both the aspects, we're gaining more information about the view and hence our knowledge and thinking will enhance. In day to day life, we're tackling so many problems and try to convince people about the correctness of our views like in exams, teachers only give us marks if they're satisfied with our answer and deducted the marks if not satisfied. So in this case the student's view should be same as teacher's view if he wants to get good marks. Hence, positive views should not be neglected as long as our opinion is considered.
In conclusion, both the views are essential to present an idea or opinion. As long as some measurements are concerned, it fully depends on the situation whether it needs same positive views of others or else it needs some contradictory ideas to shape our thinking. Both plays an important part in order to enhance the knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...finitely contradict them. In this case, theyre also increasing our knowledge. Hence, B...
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...chocklets like it can damage your teeth etc etc. Then the child learnt that chockletes ...
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...tries to convince the audience that why theyre better than the other party. They sland...
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...the audience about the fake information theyre giving. This way people get to know the...
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...inations and try to defend our view. Or may be we can consider their view as a correct...
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...n exams, teachers only give us marks if theyre satisfied with our answer and deducted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2362.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 488.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84016393443 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55248257462 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444672131148 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6596041719 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284908137816 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917679896927 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617735211069 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185728740914 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797095389918 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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