Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether the government should support the prime cities in every nation in terms of financial manner so that their traditions are presered or not. Indisputably, Without getting the financial help from the government, the major cities can develop if people are educated and peaceful there. Nevertheless, some money should be provided by government for recreational facilities and various other aspects like cleaning the city, creating artificial gardens, modification of damaged roads etc. so that people can use those facilities and flourish themselves. Thus, a government should provide some amount to the city in order to make it beautiful and blissfully happy.
First of all, there are numerous amount of things which a government should need to address inside a city for improving it. For instance, the construction of roads on faulty ways, growing of plants in order to maintain city's beauty, creation of parks and gardens where people can make friends and share their knowledge with them, cleaning of the city etc. People can't achieve this without the help of government since it takes an abundant amonut of money to achieve these which common people can't think of. Thus, with the help of government a city can prosper so that there culture and tradition are preserverd.
Furthermore, a nations culture is present not only in the major cities but throughout the whole country. But since many people are promotted from small towns and villages to cities, a city contains most of the various cultures and traditions. For instance, many software engineers are moving to California after their graduation for doing their mundane jobs. Thus, maintaining a city means preserving cultures of various places. Therefore, government should help the major cities and its people so that people can live there cheerfully and avidly.
In conclusion, although the culture of a nation is present throughout the country, it's major cities also contains varieties of cultures and traditions. Hence, a government should help people living in those cities by helping them in living peacefully and cheerfully. Moreover, they can also help people by declining the tax and other factors which affects the cost of living. By doing these a government can not only preserver the traditions and cultures amongst those cities but are also responsible for the growth of that country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... them, cleaning of the city etc. People cant achieve this without the help of govern...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ey to achieve these which common people cant think of. Thus, with the help of govern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25974025974 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71689553274 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483116883117 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.390492139 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283195362708 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10682497818 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589447442773 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195574420123 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128947282309 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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