Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether the major decisions should always be taken by the politicians and government experts or not since they are much more informed and thus have better judgement perspective then common people. Indisputably, most of the population in every country aware of what is going on in their country and hence can be able to take big decisions based on policies. Nevertheless, since government officials are nothing but the representative of people and thus are the best to take any decisions which are benefited by the people.
Firstly, the government officials considers all the pros and cons of a policy before legislating them. For example, the act of demonetization which was performed by the Indian government is a crucial act for taking out black money from the corrupted people in India. Most of the ordinary people suffers from the lack of money available in Indian ATM system for few days but ultimately they admire the government for this humongous decision. Hence, most of the big decisions should be taken by the government officials in order to benefit people and the country.
Secondly, politicians and government experts are the best people to take major decisions of a country. They considers all the aspects of a law before applying them. For instance, a single meeting of the President of America with the President of North Korea, have established peace between their countries from the issues which they were facing before. Furthermore, Indian prime minister Narendra Modi had established peace with many countries just by a small meetups with them. Therefore, government knows much more about the general people and thus are the best people to take major decisions regards to a country.
In conclusion, although most of general public are aware of whether a particular policy is good or not for them, government should take all the major decisions since they're nothing but the representative of general public. Most of the crucial decisions should be and must be taken by government officials only since they're much aware about the happenings in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...take major decisions of a country. They considers all the aspects of a law before applyin...
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Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...try. In conclusion, although most of general public are aware of whether a particular polic...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ould take all the major decisions since theyre nothing but the representative of gener...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...heyre nothing but the representative of general public. Most of the crucial decisions should b...
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Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...aken by government officials only since theyre much aware about the happenings in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, nevertheless, second, secondly, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12680115274 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79926348452 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438040345821 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9067377563 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.071428571 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.21951772744 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268567100594 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108256938448 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983995769726 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181833720779 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619619781867 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.