Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people believe that there should not be a fixed age of retirement for all types of employees. Certain employees should retire earlier and enjoy the benefits of retirement. I too agree with the same group of people.
To embark upon, certain work requires physical strength, for instance, job of a labor in a country like India is quite cumbersome and involves massive stamina. Regardless of age, they slog in the scotching heat during peak summers lifting and loading heavy construction material. Therefore, these laborious people should retire at the age of forty and given the deserved pension to make ends meet.
In addition, in a country like India, where twenty to thirty years is considered as an ideal marriageable age, one thrives to work hard to save money for their child's wedding. In this case, their monthly income does not suffice the purpose and it becomes hard on their part to fulfill the same. Subsequently, if they retire earlier not only will they have sufficient funds for their child's education or marriage but also will give them a sense of security and accomplishment.
On the other hand, when it comes to protecting our nation, for example, army personnel, it becomes imperative to work till quite an age. Priorities for such cadre of people are different from other nationals. Their pledge to serve the country makes them thrive towards their aim. Consequently, their retirement and pension can be handed over accordingly.
To recapitulate, setting a retirement age according to one's profession and personal needs can be quite beneficial. However, in some cases, it is appropriate for people from all walks of life to retire at the same age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
..., setting a retirement age according to ones profession and personal needs can be qu...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05395683453 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7214815599 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9441765722 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344385766751 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109270262377 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710784884264 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193540893338 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510993319731 0.056905535591 90% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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