We all have good and bad memories with our teachers throughout the years we spent in school, and despite the love or hate relationship, teachers surely should be respect and valued for their efforts. One of the most controversial questions is whether the teachers are getting less respect over the years ? From my perspective, I find that true and in the following paragraphs, i will adduce the reasons.
Firstly, everyone in past had the ability to pursue his/her studies to become a teacher, actually not everyone had the ability to go to school at the fist place, must parents pushed their kids to learning basic maneuvers that could offer them a simple good life Like farming, blacksmithing etc… . Moreover pursuing studies to become a teacher was considered a big accomplishment that requires sacrificing the money and the time with the family since most universities were in the capitals or the big cites . Now and because of the availability of universities and the awareness of parents, the number of teachers has increased to the point that some of them are unemployed and that made the teachers less valued than before.
Secondly, in the past there weren’t multiple sources of education and knowledge besides books and schools, so students were aware of the importance of the teacher and the opportunity they were given, and that was shown through the respect they had for their teachers. In the other hand nowadays and with the help of the one of the biggest breakthroughs in the history of human kind, which is the internet, we are able to find all sort of information by one click. As a result the internet reduced the need of going to schools and helped emerging the concept of homeschooling, and that’s one of the reasons why teachers lost their values in the modern world.
Last but not least, one of the reasons students respected and valued the teachers in the past was based on fear. Teachers had the right to beat the students if they did something wrong or inappropriate. In the last few years many lows were established, banning the beating in schools regarding the negative effect it has on the students, thus it helped building a friendly bond between the teacher and the student.
To conclude we all remember at least one teacher who had a positive impact on our lives maybe because they were able to teach us what our parents could’t, or maybe just because they were friendly and put a smile in our faces, and that is why we need to appreciate and respect them more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82638888889 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71950622301 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516203703704 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1740793537 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.384615385 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2307692308 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186921902246 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690551952937 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351550016773 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105689065884 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133639986623 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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