TPO7
It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.
It comes as no surprise that efforts to finding the best ways to improving students' efficiently have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether it is better for student to learn concepts of subjects or it is better for them to learn the facts. I, to a great extent, concur with the idea that learning concepts and ideas is far better. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that learning concepts helps students understand the rest of the course better. It goes without saying that all parts of any subject or course is closely related to each other. If students do not understand thoroughly one part, they will not understand the further sections. For example, I studied Chemical Engineer in the university. As I remember, when I was at university, I tried my best to work hard in the beginning of the semester to understand the concepts of courses like heat transfer, mass transfer, to name but a few. I was free in the rest of semester since I could answer all the question in that course based on my basic knowledge and learning the concepts. But other students wait until the last of semester and instead of rely on the concepts, solve problems to figure out what the course wants to teach. At the end, I got the best grades in the department and I was among the high ranked students in it.
Another reason deserving some words here is that learning the concepts helps students to improve faster than other students in academic and personal life. As a matter of fact, there are limited number of equations, concepts and rules on which world is based. If people learn few number of concepts in their area, they can exert them in their entire life. Consider second law of thermodynamic as a general rule exerted in many parts of our life. A students who is familiar with the concepts of this law, can exert it to many subjects and answer many questions about it.
Finally, yet importantly, learning the concepts is quite beneficial for students from a psychological standpoint. They can boost their self-confidence and self-respect. When students understand the ideas and can answer all the question related to a concept, they are encourage by other people which leads to flourishing their self-confidence. Perhaps a more specific example can shed more light on the matter. My cousin use to be a shy person, but he was really talented in his major. He understand the academic concepts really well and were encourage by family, friends and teachers for his capacity. His self-confidence gradually increased. Nowadays, he is really a confident individual. Had he not have this ability, he would not have had this self-respect.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that it is far better for students to understand concepts rather than learning facts since not only does it help them to understand the rest of courses more efficiently, but also they can improve in their life fast and it increases their self-confidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...n which world is based. If people learn few number of concepts in their area, they can exe...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: A student; Students
...rule exerted in many parts of our life. A students who is familiar with the concepts of th...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...question related to a concept, they are encourage by other people which leads to flourish...
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Line 7, column 421, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hed more light on the matter. My cousin use to be a shy person, but he was really t...
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Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...he was really talented in his major. He understand the academic concepts really well and w...
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Line 7, column 538, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...d the academic concepts really well and were encourage by family, friends and teache...
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Line 7, column 543, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
... academic concepts really well and were encourage by family, friends and teachers for his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, regarding, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, of course, as a matter of fact, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91401869159 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84895256215 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4271233562 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3703703704 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8148148148 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355110530353 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884639357951 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913219116029 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21078429989 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564047584765 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.