Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to hold a big party and invite many people to come than a small party where only a few close friends and family members are invited.
It comes as no surprise that efforts to finding the importance of inviting special people to the parties have been always among the top priorities. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is that whether it is better for people to hold small party with their close friends and family or they invite a large number of people to the party. I, to a great extent, concur with the idea that taking small parties with special people is far better. The rationale behind this thesis will be elaborated by the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point that makes me hold this belief is that parties consisting of close friend and family members are more enjoyable than parties held with many people in them. It goes without saying that people who have similar attitudes and personality can enjoy with being in contact with each other. For example, when many people are invited for a party, everyone wants to do something that the behavior may be inappropriate from others’ viewpoint. Therefore, there raises some conflicts among the guests. As I remember, last year, I was invited to a great party. There was many people which some of them wanted to drink alcoholic beverage and some other did not like it and consider it an inappropriate behavior since we live in an Islamic country. Among two groups, the conflict raised and people got angry when they wanted to come back their home.
Another reason deserving some words here is that inviting special friends and family to a party is quietly beneficial from an economic standpoint. The more people are invited to the party, the more money must be spent for preparation. So, it costs a hoard of money to the host. If the parties are hold with small number of people and their relatives, the host not only can remove unnecessary costs, but also all people can divide the duties for preparation and pick the pressure up from ones’ shoulder. With this strategy, everyone can enjoy the event and nobody get tired and bear huge expenses. For example, my family and I always hold the parties as Potluck which means everyone bring foods and drinks for others and they share everything with each other.
Finally, yet importantly, when parties are held with family and friends, people can make memorable times with each other. They can talk about their experiences and memories, talk about their jobs, success and failures without being judged by other people since all of the people are intimate. While, in the large parties, people are afraid of being judged by other people or others humiliate them. Take one of my friends, Sam, who is really a funny boy. In small parties, he always speaks about his experiences with a funny style and the time is really enjoying for everyone. But, when we are in a large party he usually is silence and does not make any joke or memory since he is afraid of being humiliated by other guests that do not know him.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned paragraphs, one can soon realize that holding small parties with close friends and family is far better than holding large parties since not only are they more comfortable with each other, but also they can divide the duties and make funny hours with each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...close friends and family or they invite a large number of people to the party. I, to a great exte...
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Line 4, column 568, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...everyone can enjoy the event and nobody get tired and bear huge expenses. For examp...
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Line 6, column 262, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hout being judged by other people since all of the people are intimate. While, in the larg...
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Line 6, column 614, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...e. But, when we are in a large party he usually is silence and does not make any joke or m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2704.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 559.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83720930233 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41482673258 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45259391771 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4412918713 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2916666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31993353015 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973607895611 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912093184903 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21980121021 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062974017095 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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