During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
* remind him when and where you met
* tell him what kind of job you are interested in
* say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am Deepti and I am from Mumbai. I am not sure whether you remember me, but let me remind you. We had met on a plane last month from Dubai to Mumbai on the 23rd. I almost spilled coffee on you and that is when we started talking. I should admit that I was very impressed by your 'down to earth' attitude and professional talent as a successful businessman who owns a chain of restaurants.
During our conversation, you had mentioned about a possible job opportunity as an accountant in one of your restaurants. It would be great, if you could provide me with some more details about the same. I am currently working as a receptionist in an Italian restaurant here in Mumbai. But most often, I help out our manager with the restaurant’s accounts.
Would you kindly consider me for this job and give me an opportunity for an interview? Let me explain why I think I am fit for this job. I am a bachelor of commerce graduate with Accounts & Finance as my majors. My academic performance is good too. Due to some financial problems, I had to take the first job that I was offered. But, I am very good at accounts and I would like to pursue it as my career. If required, I can provide you with a recommendation letter from my current manager.
Thank you for your consideration.
Thanks,
Deepti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50622406639 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9415218944 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585062240664 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7617286676 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8823529412 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239903286326 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069166034819 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786048242814 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157864976967 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384997511303 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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