Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people contend that children will become selfish when they only make choices based on their own interest, while others maintain that the freedom to make decisions on their own matters indeed. From my perspective, a child can be more decisive when he grows up if he is allowed to choose.
Some worry that children's decisions are only for themselves and they might foster bad habits like not caring about others. For instance, if a kid is fond of Western food such as the steak and French fries, he might ask his parents to cook the steak at home or order expensive steak in the restaurant frequently. If a child enjoys the roller coaster, then the amusement park can be the sole destination in every summer vacation. However, those choices are only favored by the kid rather than most of the families. The kids don't know the result of those choices and they take it for granted that everyone will follow them no matter where they want to go or what they would like to eat. All these will inevitably lead to detrimental results due to kids’ blind decision. Consequently, they might ignore the feelings of others and only do what benefit themselves.
Nevertheless, when given opportunities to choose, children can gradually learn the ability to make a best choice. In the shopping mall, children can buy what they like. Although some may argue that children might only pick the famous and expensive ones, the recent survey shows that children have the ability to balance between the price and the design. In addition, students will be able to choose their major in college and their jobs after graduation with little hesitation once they are accustomed to making their own choices. In this highly competitive society, too much hesitation usually indicates losing critical chances. that chances are gone.
All in all, although some choices might only benefit children themselves, with more knowledge, they learn to make the best decision and become decisive step by step. After all, the successful person is usually the one who can quickly determine what to choose.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...can gradually learn the ability to make a best choice. In the shopping mall, chil...
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Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ally indicates losing critical chances. that chances are gone. All in all, altho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, after all, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93484419263 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44319127502 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57507082153 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6885107131 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.470588235 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243943209088 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068877335835 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830994134861 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156158088989 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751267655498 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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