Do you agree with the following statement? Good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents. Use specific details to support your argument.
many people believe that teachers do not play an important role in the child's life. they believe that children hardwork and parents can afford are matter. but from my point of view, I believe that teacher does matter in a child's development than the parents for many reasons. reasons and examples are going to explain below.
First and foremost, All the parents are not educated enough to focus on their child's development. so teacher is only one who can educate them and aware the parents about their problem. For instance, In my village 80 percent of people are illiterate and don't know about how to child should raise, so they have good developed mind. so my village primary school teachers are call in parents in the school and give suggestions to their children in front of them. so parents and children both are aware from the problems and learn about. Therefore, in this case teacher play important role to spread the idea about the child education and their developments.
Secondly, These day parents are busy with their own work like job . they do not get enough time for the child. For example, my sister has a 2 years old baby. he lives in creche, one the school where the teacher takes care of the baby as well as to help develop different types of skills, during the office hours of my sister about 8 hours. In the creche he learn different type of game in under of teacher's guideline . so this example, show that teacher is not only important for the development of children but they are also important for to take care of baby and feeding the food to the child.
Finally, generally child's are not obey and follow the parents guidelines and their suggestion. Sometimes children think that they controlled by the parents and they do not have any freedom. To overcome this problem teacher help them and child easily follow the teachers rules and live in discipline. For example, my younger brother was very naughty at home. he did not focus on their study and all the time he was playing with friends. for this reason my parents are kept in the boarding school. After that he is become serious toward their study, and he do their homework and take a food on time.
Form the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that teachers are more important than the good parents. Because it helps children to teach disciplines, to take care and give a guidelines .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68735083532 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35066312442 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470167064439 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8697644263 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.56 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.76 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180016035379 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563097224891 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621143722673 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122529527473 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358410226895 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.