The first chart shows the energy use in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from the energy use.Summarise the information below, report changes and make comparisons where necessary

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The first chart shows the energy use in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from the energy use.
Summarise the information below, report changes and make comparisons where necessary

The first graph illustrates the proportions of six different types of energy used in an average household in Australia. The second chart demonstrates the percentages of greenhouse gas emissions resulted from the energy use.

Overall, it is clear that in Australia, heating is the most frequently used energy, while water heating creates the most gas emissions.

Looking at the first graph, it is noticeable that Australian households use heating as their main source of energy, accounted for 42%. Meanwhile, water heating and other appliances are also often used energy just after heating, with 30% and 15% respectively. On the other hand, cooling, lighting and refrigeration are among the least used types of energy, only 13% in total.

At the same time, as displayed in the second chart, water heating becomes the largest gas emitted source with 32%, followed by other appliances with just 4% in difference, accounted for about 28% of the total figures. In addition, heating and refrigeration are almost the same proportions in terms of producing greenhouse gas emissions. Last but not least, cooling and lighting create the least amount of gas emissions, with the percentages just around 3% and 8% accordingly.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, look, second, so, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30412371134 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86429621271 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3195399112 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251976292989 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126048105079 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127117450388 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18334554218 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161879597549 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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