Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
truth plays a vital role in a relationship. however, many people believe that telling truth is not always the best policy to deal with people. sometimes it depends upon the situation both sides of a question can be supported by giving good reasons.
There is a quote "truth is always bitter, and difficult to digest" it is always not easy for a person to say or hear the truth. sometimes it's better to conceal the truth for other person happiness. For example, consider your friend got a gift for your birthday, you would choose to say you didn't like the gift and hurt their feelings? Or it's better to say you love it? Besides that, many commercial advertisements persuade people by saying "within one wash you will get fairer skin" which is not true, but it influences people to buy it.
however, it is not always good to lie, especially in a relationship .one lie often begets another lie, which begets another. Sooner or later when the truth comes out it may impact your relationship, no one likes to get betrayed and it's also a burden to keep the secret. Likewise, if you start lying very often, people will not believe you even when you tell the truth. Hence, it's always important to be truthful in your relationship.
As I have said trust or truth it plays an important factor in a relationship, whether in business/family/friends. it is always a safer side, to tell the truth. After all, it is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, likewise, may, so, after all, for example, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8446969697 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12222098656 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9869355879 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193029691267 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791779839529 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441692460333 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121644476631 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226253710432 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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