At work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity -for example, you are given a task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situation that requires you to think creatively, would you prefer to work alone or with others? Why?
Throughout history, there have always been some new problems that have involved human kinds’ minds. Sometimes these attempts have failed by ordinary methods because this kind of problem could just solve by creative solutions. In this regard for this kind of unprecedented problem, some people are inclined toward the opinion that one’s should get help from others and solve it as a team, whereas others believe that doing it alone is more beneficial. From my vantage point, the former’s good points outweigh its bad points. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through three noticeable reasons.
The first reason that supports my idea is that fixing new problems need broader knowledge. There are always problems that need profound knowledge in those areas that make it hard for one’s cope with. Therefore, it is rational that they consult with others and ask their ideas about probable solutions which cause would not only they have various options for problems but also it helps them to broaden their knowledge for such problems in the future. As a personal experience, when I was a student at the university I was working on a project related to the optimization of an algorithm that was completely new for me. So, I decided to ask my advisor to help me. As a result, we could find the best solution and my project was chosen as the best project which has had great effects on enriching my resume.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting the opinion is that working as a team for solving a novel problem takes less time. Without a shadow of doubt, when an individual works on a new task, since they are not familiar with the solution, they need to try different ways until they get to the correct solution. On the other hand, they may reach to the solution which is not the best. In contrast, when one’s works with a team, they could get help other team members. Also, they could hold a meeting with team members in order to share their ideas and clarifying different aspects of the problem. Thus, it leads to saving time and the problem could solve much faster than when a person wants to solve it alone. Furthermore, working as a team will increase the likelihood of getting an optimal solution.
It is confirmed that this idea has an enormous influence on reducing stress. Most of the people when face with new tasks or problems, will experience both anxiety and stress feelings. So, they can neither concentrate on their tasks properly nor find the best solution for the problem. That’s why there is a need for working on new tasks with others. It will help ones to relieve their stress and enhance their self-confidence to solve the problem. In this regard, a research has been conducted recently on a group of people in a company. First, the group was asked to solve a new task alone and second, they worked on the task as a team. This study has had significant results and has shown that when people worked alone, they were very nervous and just 30% of them could solve the problem. But, in the next experiment, they could reach the best answer very quickly and team members had much less stress than the first experiment.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that working as a team on new problems has important impacts such as enhancing everybody’s knowledge, saving time and reducing anxiety. However, that was a story in a nutshell. Obviously, there are many details, worth discussing, which are not mentioned here. It is highly recommended that every company helps its employees to not hesitate to question from other members by applying some techniques. This helps both the company and employees to boost themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3119.0 1977.66487455 158% => OK
No of words: 638.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88871473354 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02579962599 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60664292095 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468652037618 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 926.1 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1515116121 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.46875 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126504670967 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036396473428 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330228533409 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760135291839 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228086985054 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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