online learning is as good as traditional
online learling as as good as offline or traditional learning process, is explained by spealer, but author thinks that there are few drawnacks in this type of learning system. speakers cast douts in reagard to following three point by compairing with the points mentioned in the passage with resonable examples.
Firstly, speaker states that as per passage one on one time for student and professor is not possible. there are less chances of developing personal relationships as well as less opportunities while learning online. However according to lecture this is missconception because professors are available for students in the different format. They contact with student via e-mail, chat, and sometimes through telephones. speaker also point out that not all students use one on one facility.
Secondaly, he opposes the information given in the passage that online courses are not challanging and easier than traditional course. he clarifies that it is rule that all online courses should be desined with same standard and difficulty level as offline course. Furthermore, he notes that according to students from survey study, online process seems easy bbut its not. student must learn technology withh course corriculum additionally not only time management but also self decipline is important.
Last but not the least, he denies the validity of the point that well known universities do not provide online degree programme and if student wish to study in prestigious college, he would join the traditional college. speaker contradicts this point by saying that this is not true. All colleges and universities provide variety of offline courses exception is only pricintone. pricintone, a university, provides some online courses with 1 term residential requirement
Hense in conclusion speaker lucidly casts doubt and states his point of view with cogency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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online learling as as good as offline or traditional learning...
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... student and professor is not possible. there are less chances of developing personal...
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...nd professor is not possible. there are less chances of developing personal relation...
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...oping personal relationships as well as less opportunities while learning online. Ho...
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...hat, and sometimes through telephones. speaker also point out that not all students us...
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...ing and easier than traditional course. he clarifies that it is rule that all onli...
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...y study, online process seems easy bbut its not. student must learn technology with...
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...he would join the traditional college. speaker contradicts this point by saying that t...
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...e courses exception is only pricintone. pricintone, a university, provides some online cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50689655172 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85924455569 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0426238741 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230624103197 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716373496651 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112915711447 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123875200506 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109755891682 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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