Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience
Which kind of leisure activities children should take part in has become important now. Some people think that activities mean for education purpose are best utilization of time. However, in my opinion, it is not mandatory for leisure activities to be educational ones at all,
To initate with, leisure activities help children learn life which otherwise cannot be acquired siting on class benches through curriculum. Leisure activities cannot be in manner text books are taught. Infact, such undertakings are interested based. Decision to join a particular community club by a child helps to advance life in many practical ways and does not go in vain. Unconsciously, he is inculcating skills such as team building and communication. Many research finding advocates the fact that many successful personalities in this world were proactive in their childhood and discover their life purpose outside the classrooms.
Furthermore, non-educational activities help children remain physically fir and mentally strong. Nowadays, children are burdened with lengthy home assignments. Under such strain, children’s health can degrade and they can become mentally dull. So, Leisure activities based on hobbies and interests provides an alternative to escape this mechanical life. This fact has been proven scientifically that children performing physical sports and games on regular basis outperforms their counterparts who do not indulge in sporting activites.
To reiterate, leisure activities , other than educational ones, prove to be effective in mental , spiritual and physical development of children in timely fashion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86610878661 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12851513704 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677824267782 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2632002186 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187844636363 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629800550378 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538556058149 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123034109308 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419000432151 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.47 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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