Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; Others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give the advantages of each and support your viewpoint.
Most people want to learn a foreign language for communicate with other country; There are many advantages from this skill. Some people have learned a foreign language in their country, while others think that learn in the country which it is spoken is better. Personally, I completely agree that learning in native country is better, and I will provide more aspects and examples to support this notion.
First and foremost, people can learn from the real user where the language is spoken. When you study a language with teachers who also use it, they are professional and truly realize how to learn from their language. To illustrate this, when I have learned Japanese in Japan, I learned from my Japanese teacher, and he was good to demonstrate all practice. Therefore, I think, all of his advises, that is the reason why I could rapidly learn Japanese.
Secondly, learning in the country where the language is spoken is not only give you about language but also tell you about the culture. People who live abroad are learn their culture from schools or markets, and culture will make you to truly understands more about language. I can attest this from my own experience, Japanese is the language that their alphabets and pronunciations are come from their culture. The character of their alphabets is from their lore. When you learn their culture, it relates to the language. Therefore, japan culture is help to learn their language easily.
In conclusion, I truly agree that learning a language in the country where it is spoken is the best. This is due to the fact that you will learn from the best in this field, and moreover, you will learn about culture that effectively helps your learning language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...the culture. People who live abroad are learn their culture from schools or markets, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92123287671 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50982307337 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458904109589 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7162011831 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432085977374 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17421666611 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138505262046 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29524932606 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152582968624 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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