Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Most countries have poor people and each country has own methods to deal with the poor. This essay shows so the poor me of the reasons for poverty such as the low salaries income and high taxes, moreover the ways and recommendation which can be helped the poor people.
Firstly, global poverty is the most important topic should take a special aspect of our life. The poor people they can not find the necessary food and important things in their life and the mean reasons of that low income and high taxes that government put it, hence there no balance between income and outcome. For instance, in Egypt since 2011 the salaries still fixed and there is an increase in prices of goods, as a result of that the percentage of Egypt poor people has been increased by 20%.
Secondly, from my point of view, world poverty is a global issue. That means all countries should meeting to find probable solutions for it. Developed countries should help developing countries with money and education in order to give them their experience to solve that problem.in addition to that decision-makers should search for ways to increase income and decrease taxes. For instance, East Asian countries when they became community members the person’s incomes have been increased
In conclusion, global poverty is an important task for all nations ought to find the required solutions to solve global poverty such as increase incomes and reduce taxes. It is recommended that countries should held a meeting each year to discuss world poverty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...erson's incomes have been increased In conclusion, global poverty is an impo...
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...ing each year to discuss world poverty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9766536965 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51279937498 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7281565007 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312513139415 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130832689852 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922782265456 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206630914754 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124099155683 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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