Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of using printed materials over internet. If I were forced to choose one, I would definitely prefer internet for research to printed materials for myriad reasons and I develop these ideas in later paragraphs.
To begin with, the main benefit of using internet is its flexibility and accessibility. Books and articles can be accessed from anywhere and anytime with the internet which is not possible with printed materials. Moreover, the availability of the books in the library is not promised. It is impossible for the library to maintain thousands of copies while it is easy with internet. For instance, I had to wait a month to access a German language book that was checked out by others because our library maintains few copies of books. Further, a student can access only fixed number of books at a time which makes the learning process difficult and demotivates students from learning. Moreover, the videos and virtual images depicting the research has significant impact and motivates students towards research.
Secondly, the pollution associated with the production of printed books and the wastage it incurs is favoring people to use internet. For the production of paper, deforestation, and for printing special chemicals has to be used and after the production complete recycle of the product produced is impossible, moreover by time there is deterioration of the printed material. For instance, ancestors from India has written about medicinal value of plants in Vedas which were destroyed over time, the knowledge one acquires is a waste if it is unable to educate next generation. Now the research has to e started from the beginning which might take a lot of time, labor and lives. But in the case of internet one has the backup options and memory saving clouds which help to save our data and anybody can reach the clouds with permissions. Scientists can now concentrate on other aspects of development.
So, for the afore-mentioned reasons i prefer using internet over printed materials for research. The flexibility and accessibility and the environmental concerns are the major factors motivating me to choose the internet over printed materials for research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18082191781 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88691471986 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523287671233 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8579457189 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.235294118 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229522968669 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863325549234 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715853137714 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16364833634 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02761404167 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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