Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people and scientists believe that playing video games is a waste of time and energy for the children and since the children are the cornerstone of a bright future for a prosprose society, they should not be allowed to play them. With that being said, I believe that not only video games aren't harmless for the children, but also they are actually of great importance for the youngesters to be involved with. I will give three main reasons why I believe that video games are healthy, in following paragraphs.
First of all, children have a lot of time during the day and beside their school and homework they should be able to fill their daily time with safe and secure hobbies. Children need to enjoy their childhood and if they get involved in activities that might be of great fun, but not safe they might never enjoy their time as a child. for example imagine that if children start climbing trees because they don't have anyhting else to do and suddenly one of them slips and injures his or her spine and the poor child get paralized. While the same kid could simply be sitting on the couch, safe and sound, playing video games.This example clearly shows how video games that the children can sit behind a screen and enjoy them are much more safer thatn other activities.
Second of all, many recent researches has been conducted on the effect of video games on children's mind and the results confirm that when children are for example playing a mind game and they are constantly thinking about a mystery and the keys to solve it, it helps them to nurture their minds and also because anything is possible in video games and the children can do what they think is the best it helps to provide a great scope for imaginition in children and as we all know the importance of a healthy active mind, we can not deny the important role of video games in nurturing such minds. Also many children may find out what they are good at, in other word what is their talent by playing video games.
Finally, with the advances in technology and visual effects and video games with actual physical activity compabalities the children can play video games with physical activities that helps them to remain healthy and learn some skills while enjoying playing video games. For example if a child play skate board at home on a special stage made by the gaming compony for home usage, not only he or she is learning to ride a skate at home without any special tool or coach but also the child has a lot of physical activities from jumping around.
In conclusion, I believe that today children should be allowed to play video games. Playing video games is not a waste of time for children, because the children are safe around them, they can train their minds and find their talents playing video games and also instead of trying hard and spending lots of money on classes for learning a sport, they can simply learn and master what ever they want simply at home using video games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61163227017 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21240132266 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444652908068 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.83272031 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.076923077 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.6045352989 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271997058551 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131437667017 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652465366478 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187330884441 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469182127288 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 11.7677419355 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.