In countries the average weight of people are increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is said that health is wealth and without good health condition a person cannot enjoy their life. Health is often related to one’s weight and fitness levels since excess fat in body is linked to various disease according to numerous medical studies. Generally speaking people in some countries might be fit overall; however on the other hand, the average weight of people are rising at an alarming rate which is the issue of great concern. On this note this essay will first discuss some of the main causes of increasing weight of people and then it will talk about measure that could be taken to tackle this problem.
To begin with, one of the primary reason for the increase in obesity among people and their indolent behavior is the advancement in technology. Although technology has made our lives easier and more efficient; on the negative side, it has changed our lifestyle and replaced many of our physical activities with lazier ones. For example, in previously times children used to spend their leisure time playing sports and indulge in other outdoor physical activities, but now most of the people spend their free time playing video games or surfing the internet. Another factor to blame for soaring average weight is the change in diet of people. According to one survey, due to rapid pace of life people are becoming more and more reliant on fast food and processed food to satisfy their appetites which contain high proportion of oil and artificial fats that are not only high caloric but are also deleterious to our health.
Looking at the problems associated with fat and deteriorating health of the people it is crucial that steps should be taken to encourage health lifestyle among people. Schools and workplace should build gymnasiums and encourage student and employees to participate in physical exercises. Also, government should take actions that improve the general health of people, for instance it should devise policies that discourage the selling of fast food and processed food by imposing high taxes on such items and using the collected tax on country’s health resources. Furthermore, government should do awareness campaign among the citizen and built infrastructure resources for city’s resident such as jogging track and sports ground where they can perform physical activities.
To summarize, owing to various factors the average weight of people has increased considerably in recent years and the soon we realize the negative consequences of it and take step to hinder them the better it would be for us and our future generations to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13615023474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60181698202 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565727699531 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7185292635 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.285714286 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250386635017 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807461229462 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564504766912 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149205079551 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803124540585 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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