issue topic claim: creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence

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issue topic claim: creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence

Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence

Intelligence can be measure by how cogent the person is,or by the way he or she deals with the situation and various such factors. But typically we measure the intelligence by how well they perform in their academics but is it the right way?. I don't think that only the academic brilliance should be a measure of intelligence. In fact i agree that creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence.

Let's consider the example of GRE analytical writing , even a standardized test like this judges the student on the way they think and how creatively they can pen down their thoughts and arguments. Creativity is not just to make the essay fanciful but also to view a situation with a different perspective and and describe it.A well put essay could help the examiner to understand the quantitative reasoning and critical analysis done by the student

Creativity is usually compared art and craft but it is not so.Creativity is how well you can express your thoughts via your speech, Letter, painting, poems or stories. There are various solution provider companies which just work on the problem statement provided my their clients and provide creative solutions. one such example was of a funnel, so the symmetrical funnel faced the problem of clogging so the solution provided by the company was to provide an asymmetrical funnels such as both the flows cut each other at 90 degree which led to no clogging.This was an example for creative thinking and providing intelligent solution

On the other hand we cannot deny the fact that the students who excel academically are intelligent as subjects like math and science requires high logical analysis. They might not be creative in the way they express their thoughts but it does not make them any less intelligent.

The overall reasoning and thinking should be the measure of intelligence.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, in fact, such as, by the way, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03405572755 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86001717071 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.12997538 60.3974514979 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.6 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308442351287 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173336353809 0.0831039109588 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164609108525 0.0758088955206 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255806074715 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.254679551386 0.0667264976115 382% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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