When famous people such as actors, athletes, and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays there is a debate among people in different cultures and societies about the influences that a famous person can have on his/her people. Some believe in paying attention to the theories given by celebreties while others do not, needles to say that Both group have their own ideas and beliefs. personally, I suppose, there is no evidence about suitable effects of advices of these people. Therefore, I will declare my toughts in the following essay.
First and foremost, is there anything to prove the different between a popular and a normal individual? Moreover, it is obvious that mass media has a great influence on human brain in the modern life, aslo different types of media supports a special group of people as important people. my persoanl experience is a compelling example of this, a super famous soccer player who has his immense number of fans made an illogical desicion about leaving a polotical party. Hence, his follower did the same, but, after a while he became aware of his fault. At the end of this long story, he experienced a great downfall in his followers because of his wrong decide.
Secondly, today any field needs an expert to talk and most of the people don't care about general speeches about a special matter. On the other hand, society members analyzing every attractive recommend before taking it to acount. Thus, In my opinion famous people don't have the influence on the people as they did before. For instance, Imagine an actor who is really famous and accepted by most parts of the society, the day in that he starts giving ideas about psycology or anthropoly is the last time of his fame!
To sum up, I am of the opinion that a famous actress or a winner of soccer world cup can not manage to be a conveniet leader for his/her people for being in the shadow of diverse media and because of lack in knowledge in wide range of majors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i suppose, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69486404834 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4749159153 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583081570997 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2618475899 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 5.45110844103 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132536461006 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439645291053 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475812743515 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807739675366 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263065319608 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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