you have been told the dormitory room at the university must be share by two students.
would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate?
Sometimes we must choose an important desicion despite of our interest. it can be at the moment of purchasing a car or choosing a new person as a friend. Clearly, all the people think about advantages and disadvantages of their choice in every matter. In my view, it is a better to choose somthing by my own rather than allowing others to bring something unfamiliar for me. Hence, I will choose my roommate if the rooms of the dormitary are shared. In the following essay I will expose my idea about the reason of my desicion.
First and foremost, isn't it better to spend a lot of time with a close friend in a shared place? I suppose, it can be a great chance to be with an old friend in the university period. my persoanl experience is a compelling one in this situation, at the time I was living in dormitory of the university in which I studied bachlor degree of mechanics. saji a close friend of mine started studying Physics at the same university one year after me. Consequently, we managed to live in a same campus. However, his classes were not at the same region of the city in which I was living and the university for engineering was. Therefore, he was happy to be my roommate but takes time to reach to his classes in another state of the city.
Secondly, it isn't easy to find an individual to match with as a roommate. Certainly, you must endure in many different situations to just continue a convenient relaishonship with a stranger. For instance, mori is a friend of mine who has no option to choose somebody as a roommate. Thus, he shared his room with a person who was studying fine arts, simultainesly mori was a simple student in mechanics. They didn't have any kind of similarites and it become a great issue for both of them. As a result, frustrated mori asked me to join to our room (me and saji) and I accepted because of his depression.
To sum up, if I imagine that I must choose between the two stated stuation. Abseloutely, I will choose to the second one because of the fortune to become roommate with a close friend and because of the problems that I can have with an unknown person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i suppose, kind of, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43846153846 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72790749292 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5515230912 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4285714286 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225356353642 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057335662041 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367351028442 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121975198113 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183487227883 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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