Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Is modern technology creating a asingle world culture? I personally contend that modern technology is playing vital role in creating single world culture as it is diminishing the differences that used to exist in the field of busineses, entertainment and education.
We can see that with the advent of technology, similar business practices are followed throughout the world. I explicitly remember that about 6 years ago, I was flabbergasted on learning that one of my cousin in U.S.A can work from home. At that time, work from home culture wasn’t a common in India. However, with the development of I.T infrastructure, “work from home” has now become new normal in India as well. Therefore, we are now having similar work culture like U.S.A and other European countries.
Furthermore, this trend can also be observed in the field of entertainment. About 20 years back, different countries used to have different types of entertainment contents. However, with the emergence of OTT platforms like Netflix; we can now the enjoy the entertainment content from almost any part of the world. Thus, I posist that modern technology is helping to create single world culture.
Similar to entertainment, we can also see the coherence in the educational system across the globe. Earlier only the fortunates ones had an opportunity of pursuing education from western and European countries. But, with the rise of several online education portals providing quality education, it is possible for the students in developing nations to gain high quality education as per their convience and interest similar to students in developed nations. My completion of mechanical design engineering course from the online course portal “Coursera” is the perfect illustration. I succesfully learned the fundamental concepts of mechanical design from the professors of Cornell University of U.S.A through the online portal which otherwise would have been impossible for me to learn from such a prestigious university. Therefore, I contend that technology is slowly establishing single world culture.
Based on above stated illustrations, I feel that single world culture is being created by modern technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45747800587 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11532478128 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557184750733 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5420893088 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.388888889 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198055342181 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797878566897 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975699236154 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150453284882 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093823822766 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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