You rented a car from a car rental company The air conditioner has stopped working You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired Write a letter to the company In your letter introduce yourself explain the situation say what action y

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You rented a car from a car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain the situation
• say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to express my disappointment regarding the car I hired from your rental company three weeks ago.
My name is Caren and I have been renting a car from your company forthe past three years and this time also I rented a Toyota Innova with car number CH01 R 2341. But unfortunately, the car I hired recently is making my travel pathetic.
Being a regular customer of yours, you know I frequently need to visit other cities for meetings. This time I am travelling to Rajasthan and everyone is aware of the weather that is so hot. The moment I entered the state, the air conditioner stopped working as the coolant was finished. It became so difficult to reach the desired destination but somehow I managed on that day. I called customer service a week ago but still, no resolution has been done.
So, I want that the air conditioner should be repaired soon or an alternate car should be arranged as soon as possible. I would also suggest you check the car once before handing it to the customer so that these situations can be avoided as it is not good for the company’s reputation as well.
I am hoping for a quick resolution of the problem.
Yours faithfully, 2/12/2020
Caren

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., 2/12/2020 Caren
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, still, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75688073394 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69073747811 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7886008456 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309558547064 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894711127976 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797832658544 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132946163418 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917624154286 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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