Many people do not forgo their work for the sake of the health. Since there is a surge in unemployment, people are not ready to take up financial risks and hence, they give up on their health. Although, I partially agree that people should take good care of their health, they must ensure that their project deadlines are met.
To commence with, people must take proper care of their health. As health and mind are inseparable, if either one of them is affected, it impacts the other one too. Hence, people with illness cannot be productive and if they keep on working, it can have adverse effects on their health. Moreover, if people have any contagious disease, it will not only affect their health but it causes illness to their co-workers as well. For example, if people who are affected with some highly contagious diseases like coronavirus, travel to work, there are high chances that the disease might spread to others. Hence, it is the social responsibility of the people to ensure their health as well as their co-workers health are not affected.
On the other hand, people who are suffering from minor ailments, which are completely manageable, must think of attending their office. For example, if people are having minor health issues like muscle cramps, they should plan to attend their work. Furthermore, if people are having a project deadline which would be affected due to their absence, they should be sensible while taking a decision. Moreover, if people are affected with any contagious disease, they can connect virtually from home if the employer offers such facilities. Thus, they can make sure that the disease is not spread as well as they can finish their projects on time.
To conclude, people must ensure that their health as well as their colleagues’ health are not affected due to their decisions and they should also be sensible and have a proper commitment towards their work.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45954929124 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45987654321 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8240142921 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210860817264 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100272784041 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291880649193 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160690247578 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175397028063 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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