Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs. Besides, TV can also be seen as a companion. To what extent do you agree with this?
Television has a crucial factor for the learn Knowledge and information from Tv program. In the contemporary world,It is an irrefutable fact that Television serves many functions. watching tv makes us relax is true. Effectiveness of Television is one of the chronically discussed issues of the recent time. In the context of this problem. I agree with the notion that Television serves many functions. watching tv makes us relax. However, its demerits cannot be marginalised.
At the outset, Television has advantages. Firstly, the Television has associated with various benefits. Futher, these advantages of Television make it an important aspect of the development. For example, many object are better in many fields becacuse of Television. Hence,Television prove to be beneficial for the futher of object.
On the other hand, every entrenched practic is a double-edged sword and it is essential to contemplate the limitation of Television. First of all, Television may have some negative impact of chlidren. Furthermore, Knowledge and Information also face difficulty in doing it. For instance, these disadvantages of Television many cause destrution at the fundamental level. Therefor It is not wis to adopt this subject under some adverse conditions.
In a nutshell, I would like to reiterate that Television serves many functions. Watching TV makes us relax. We can learn knowledge and information from TV programs is true; but, necessary precautions should be taken.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Television has a crucial factor for the learn Knowledge and information from Tv progr...
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Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...om Tv program. In the contemporary world,It is an irrefutable fact that Television ...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Watching
... that Television serves many functions. watching tv makes us relax is true. Effectivenes...
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Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Watching
... that Television serves many functions. watching tv makes us relax. However, its demerit...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun object seems to be countable; consider using: 'many objects'.
Suggestion: many objects
...aspect of the development. For example, many object are better in many fields becacuse of T...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Television
...any fields becacuse of Television. Hence,Television prove to be beneficial for the futher o...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun cause seems to be countable; consider using: 'many causes'.
Suggestion: many causes
...ance, these disadvantages of Television many cause destrution at the fundamental level. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53303964758 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26957728946 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581497797357 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6551724138 166% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1582245553 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8095238095 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8095238095 20.9669160288 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449939330777 0.242375264174 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133510490404 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130930556879 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281006390336 0.151781067708 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176754561595 0.0609392437508 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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