Some people think that the only way to judge someone s success in business is by the amount of money they make Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured

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Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?

It is true that many people believe that the profit gain is the true measure to judge the success of a business. However, I would argue that there are several other aspects to judge the success of any business. This essay will outline different indicators of success of a business.

To comments with, gaining more profit is one of the prime objectives of many businesses over the world. Additionally, the annual profit of any business is very important to pull in new investors and thus, achieving expansion and growth. Hence, there is no doubt about money being one of the crucial indicators of success.

However, there are many other potential ways to evaluate the success of a business. Employee welfare is clearly one of the true indicators of company success. If employees are not happy, it may lead to the failure of a company. Secondly, customer satisfaction is also an important aspect of success of a business. For instance, satisfied customers could bring more clients. Thirdly, the brand value of any business across the nation or the globe, is also an indicator of success. Finally, there are many businessmen who earn respect in the society, this is because of the trust they have built over the years.

It can be concluded that profit is an important indicator of success. However, in my opinion, there are many other aspects such as customer satisfaction and number of clients, are equally important

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95815899582 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66542632055 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514644351464 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2174264054 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355794569484 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120055992799 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737813792156 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209356678562 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666246933094 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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