People have been always dealing with their social environment and therefore they are looking for a convenient environment for their traits. I believe that moving to another city will be helpful for people’s social life problems. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, restarting life in another place will help you solve your personal problems before trying to meet other people. Losing old friends will cause insecurity in your future life because you may think that losing all your friends is because of your personality, in that manner, your amount of stress will raise. Therefore, when you moved to another town, people who live in they will not know anything about you because of that you may have recognized all your problems and you might have done several things to refine them. My example is the best illustration of that. When I was going to university in my second year I have decided to change my school and moved to another place because of my friends at that time. I and my friends' relationship had started in a good manner for the first time however day by day our relationship and their behavior has changed a lot. Therefore, after two years of friendship and also because of them my other relationships with my old friends had been ended which means I did not have any friends in my hometown left and because of that, I blamed myself so much. Thus, I have changed my school and town where I live to readily meet other people, and not surprisingly it had happened because I have given myself several months to rest and recognized my problems with my old friends. Thanks to that awareness I have been friends with other problems and avoided my old behavior to not ruin my new friendships.
Secondly, fresh starts can give people be the strength to just be themselves. Being friends with a person in the same city you live in for many years may have caused you to never feel lonely for a long time. In that manner, you may have not developed your ability about that issue, therefore, when you have lost all of your friends may force you to get into an arduous situation that you do not have any idea how to manage. Thus, changing your town will be so beneficial for you because if you stayed in your city you may have to go to the same places which you were going to with your old friends, therefore, you may feel more vulnerable and alone. For instance, when I had a bad ending with my old friends, I just wanted to stay at home and was afraid to go out. Since going somewhere with my friends is our daily routine, going somewhere could have made everything worse for me when I was just getting used to not being friends with them. Therefore, moving to another city was more beneficial for me because it made me realize that I could create routines for myself in my new city and realize that I can do things on my own without being friends with anyone.
All in all, I feel strongly that moving to another city would be beneficial in their lives, even if just because of relationships with friends. Because people who move to another city can take time to relax and recognize problems and gain awareness that their priority should be only themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 582.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5412371134 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39668303771 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40206185567 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 823.5 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7158476639 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30194214742 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105531681043 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497133847728 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190004481218 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452188134456 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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