Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The environment that we live in has a considerable impact on our lives. The people and nature surrounding us can have a significant effect on our mentality. In my view it is of utmost importance to move from one place to another to live a fulfilling life. I will discuss my reasonings for this notion in the following essay.
First, it is important to work and learn in different environments. no matter how diverse a cities population the experience that we can gain from working in different societies cannot be duplicated. For example, I had a friend that worked in Tehran the capital of my country later on she moved to Germany and started working there. she depicted that the way the work was done and the procedure as well as how her colleagues interacted with each other was very different from what she was used to and she learned so much from the new environment that when she returned there were many new inovations in her mind that helped her improve if she hadn't traveled she may still be stuck in the mindset that the majority of her coworkers were in. as you can clearly see she gained an experience that she couldn't get if she hadn't traveled outside of the country.
Second, it is important to understand the world we live in. By traveling from one place to another we can experience new cultures and witness new sceneries this will energize us and help us with our mental health. For example, recently a friend of mine was very depressed her psychologist proposed for her to start traveling. After a period of time she contacted me telling me about the fun of knowing new people, cultures and finding happiness in small happenings. She soundedd very happy and said that she understood so much more about her surroundings after a period of time, having a sense of accomplishment whenever she encountered and understood new things.
In conclusion, I believe that it is better to move from one place to another to have a better life. This action not only helps us to advance in our work, but also helps us get a better understanding of the world we live in. So we should all at least move from place to place a few times.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56770833333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6891750271 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497395833333 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0904611066 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.176470588 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154880449597 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664312215097 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897928207702 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127480474399 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781076116282 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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