Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Connecting is an essential factor of human life. Humans are social animals. Hence, no matter where we are we tend to communicate and connect. As a result, there have been discussions about whether it is better to offer network access and an internet connection to all citizens at no cost. In my view, There is a need for all citizens to have access to the internet free of charge.
First, some people cannot access offline education institutes. Some people may have medical issues preventing them from leaving their houses or living in environments with difficulties accessing an education center. For these people to have better education opportunities, it is essential to have free internet. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, many people couldn't leave their houses. Furthermore, there are many children in remote villages with no access to educational facilities, and poverty prevents them from leaving their hometowns to live in places with better facilities. Numerous children have to give up higher education due to the abovementioned situations. Free internet access can allow these people to access online courses resolving the issue. as you can see, free internet access can greatly impact the betterment of the citizens' education.
Second, mental health is an essential issue for everybody. When away from home and under financial pressure, connecting with our family and friends sustaining no costs, allows us to feel less lonely and depressed. For example, when Mahse, a friend of mine, migrated to another country, she was very lonely and was under a lot of stress due to financial issues. Mahsa explained that she would cry every night for six months and was going through a phase of depression. Her depressed mood went on until she had access to the internet, allowing her to connect with her family. She said that this connection allowed her to feel a lot better, and she felt happier. I believe there are many others with such an experience. So, by providing internet free of charge, these people can connect with their loved ones and lead better lives.
In conclusion, I believe it is essential to provide free internet access to all citizens because free internet access can guarantee better education and mental health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11684782609 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67398898575 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0026809455 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5909090909 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244200681671 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773564237199 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076671077897 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175292791207 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445002357914 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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