I strongly agree with Andrew’s perspective that spending money on teaching existing employees should not be a priority for a company. I want to add that training current employees will waste not only financial resources but also time. Accordingly, companies can save their time and currency by recruiting skilled workers. Furthermore, being trained to perform a certain task can be strikingly stressful for current employees because they would fear if they can conquer performing the task or not. I understand Kelly’s concern over the dissatisfaction of current workers, but I believe she misses another critical point. Employees can search and find their best niche where they are valued more. In that case, working in the right position provides them with more income. Drawing from my own experience, when I changed my job and worked in a position where I was a better match, I gained a better career worthiness.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People should focus on the happiness of others instead of their own happiness use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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- Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world From the fossil remains we know that agnostids were primitive arthropods relatives of modern 3
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