Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Some people think that people today’s are happier than people in the past. They think that people today have more advanced lives. People believe that the technology and the improvement in lives are the sources of happiness. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that people in the past were happier than people today. The basis of my opinion is social, financial and personal.
From the social perspective, people in the past were more socially active. . For instance people life was much simpler then people life today’s. people in the past did not have to much work to do. They did not have today’s advanced life. Mom responsibilities were to take care of her children and her home. Dad responsibilities were to work and get some to live a happy life with his family. On the other hand parents today’s life are completely different. Mom and dad are working both to get more money. They put the kids in day care from a very little age. In the past people lives were happier and simpler than people today’s.
Financially, people today’s are seeking for collecting more money even if that will affect the quality of their lives. Today’s people the important role in their lives is working and money. Family and happiness in life are the last things they are looking for. For example, with the arrival of technology and the improvement in the life style of the people, all the people around the world are seeking fro buying fancy home, expensive car and so on. Hence, the lives attract people to work more and more to gain enough money to satisfy their need. But unfortunately people enter the cycle of working and searching for money and they forget hoe to enjoy their life and to be happy.
personally, life was really fantastic when i was child. In the pas when i was child our life was really simple and easy. I remember my mom was a always staying at home preparing food and taking care of us. My dad was working and when he came back from work we used to sit together and watch a movie or talked. On the week end we used to go to our grand mom home. All the family were their, they were gathering to enjoy the time together. On the other hand, after I grow up and i become a mom my life completely changed. My lives become more complex. We rarely stay with each other as a family. Life engulfs us in its cycle. As we can see people in the past were more happier than people today
In conclusion, for the reasons I stated above I think that people in the past were happier than people of todays. Lives were simpler. People main purpose in life was just to live a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56875 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46731741428 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427083333333 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2208644349 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6571428571 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08571428571 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310381502845 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938538212085 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984187953553 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224916991167 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070009685078 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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