According to a recent report, cheating among college and university students is on the rise. However, Groveton College has successfully reduced student cheating by adopting an honor code, which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic endeavors and to notify a faculty member if they suspect that others have cheated. Groveton's honor code replaced a system in which teachers closely monitored students; under that system, teachers reported an average of thirty cases of cheating per year. In the first year the honor code was in place, students reported twenty-one cases of cheating; five years later, this figure had dropped to fourteen. Moreover, in a recent survey, a majority of Groveton students said that they would be less likely to cheat with an honor code in place than without. Thus, all colleges and universities should adopt honor codes similar to Groveton's in order to decrease cheating among students.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
According to argument, the recent report state that, the cheating among college and universit students is rise because of this issue, Groveton College have start the honored code system in their college and sucessful to reduced the number of cheating in last five year. However, the given recommendation can be evaluated, three questions must be answered.
First of all, recent survey says that, the number of cheating in college and university is increases but how they conclude that the number of cheating is rise in recent year? They are not given any past referene to show about the rise in cheating. further they are not stating the survey full information to give support their statement. If they do not have any evidence and proof regarding the past data and survey done by them, then the above question is weakened the argument.
Secondly, do caught student are not doing cheating in next year? So, given survey says that, the on applying honor code in Groveton College, the number of cheating students is decreases. but they are not stating that, the student caught for cheating is now not doing cheating during the exam. Perhaps, if this student are not doing cheating then the which new student are doing cheating in next four year because the nuumber of cheating is decreases but not completely end. if above argument is true then the argument does not hold water.
Finally, do student told the truth about the honor code? the argument said that, student told that the because of honor code they are not doing cheating but the survey are not clearly state that, which student they asked the question about honor code ie. the student who cheated earlier or those who not cheated. additinally, they are not stating that, on which exam mode the honor code technique is useful. if they not have any explanation on above question then maybe the argument is not strongly evaluated.
In conclusion, as it stated survey is unmatured presented in front of other without any evaluation therefore if they can give the explanation on above question then and then we will consider the survey is nicely done.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 18 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1707 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.755 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.773 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.418 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 359.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90250696379 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36840559338 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426183844011 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5780372477 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.70786347227 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374557175294 0.218282227539 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139485390254 0.0743258471296 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133412154844 0.0701772020484 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220528410625 0.128457276422 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139308054405 0.0628817314937 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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