The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc."A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures that our socks ar

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The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc.
"A recent study of our customers suggests that our company is wasting the money it spends on its patented Endure manufacturing process, which ensures that our socks are strong enough to last for two years. We have always advertised our use of the Endure process, but the new study shows that despite our socks' durability, our average customer actually purchases new Dura-Socks every three months. Furthermore, our customers surveyed in our largest market, northeastern United States cities, say that they most value Dura-Socks' stylish appearance and availability in many colors. These findings suggest that we can increase our profits by discontinuing use of the Endure manufacturing process."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

The Vice President of marketing at Dura-Sock, Inc. makes a number of unwarranted assumptions, which if proved otherwise will seriously undermine the cogency of the argument. Moreover, the lack of sufficient evidence to corroborate the claims renders the argument suspect.

To begin with, the argument lacks details of the study it mentions. It assumes that the results of the survey are accurate and credible enough to be applied for analysing the profits. However, in the absence of adequate data to substantiate the extent of geographical and demographic coverage of the study, the reliability of the surveying agency, and the relevance of the results to the profits of the manufacturing process, it is not feasible to conclude that the supposition is justified. It is quite likely that the surveyors only studied customers of a particular age group, or concentrated only in a certain neighbourhood. Such a study will not be representative of the entire lot of Dura Sock customers. It is possible that there were unsurveyed customers who could have opined positively about the socks. Hence, without the proof that the study is representative of all the customers, the assumption stands fallible.

Additionally, the vice president supposes that because the study depicts their customers purchasing Dura-Socks every three months, the latter are unhappy. Contrastingly however, because the argument contains no proof whether the customers are unsatisfied with the durability of the socks, the assumption appears fallacious. Further, it does not elucidate whether Endure manufacturing process gurantees that the durability of the socks will last two years even if used on a daily basis or without any delicate care. It is possible that the socks do not last long if worn or used over a certain limit of delicacy. It might be so that the customers surveyed were rigorous users like atheletes or work officials, who need to change socks often. These people might actually find Dura socks better than any other variety, as a result of which they go back to buy them exclusively. In such a case, Endure manufacturing process must actually be contributing to increasing profits instead of decreasing them.

Lastly, the vice president assumes the fact that customers drawn from their largest market favors the stylish appearance and availability of many colours of the Dura socks implies they despise the other aspects of the product. However, the vice president fails to comprehend that the appearance and colour availability are the two criteria that these customers value the ‘most’ and it is very likely that they appreciate the rest of the socks features as well. Besides, if the customers are attracted by the colours and appearance of these socks, then these two are potential avenues for increasing the sales of Dura socks. And the better appearance and colour variety may not be possible without Endure manufacturing process. At any rate, these qualities only will increase the sales and hence the profits, and not decrease them. The fact that the customers only pointed out the two qualities they most admire, should not be construed as implying that the socks are not received well by people, more so without garnering the feedbacks on the other features. Also, it should not be assumed that the same variety and appaearnce will be possible to produce, without the manufacturing process.

In essence, the argument consists of a number of flawed suppositions. First, there was an acute paucity of corroborating details regarding the reliability and relevance of the study it mentioned. Secondly, the assumption that the customers are unsatisfied with the durability of the product because they buy new socks every three months, is highly fallible. There might be a host of factors that would potentially belie this assumption. Thirdly, the appearance and color variety of Dura socks that some customers favour, might be only possible to produce because of the manufacturing process. Besides, the fact that customers love these two features over the others, cannot be interpreted that they abhore the others. Moreover, these two features which might be a result of the manufacturing process, must be only increasing the profits rather than diminishing it. Hence, had the argument provided enough evidence to nullify these possibilities, it would have been more credible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as a result', 'at any rate', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240669240669 0.25644967241 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.14157014157 0.15541462614 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694980694981 0.0836205057962 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0656370656371 0.0520304965353 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030888030888 0.0272364105082 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123552123552 0.125424944231 99% => OK
Participles: 0.032175032175 0.0416121511921 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93586673239 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016731016731 0.026700313972 63% => OK
Particles: 0.001287001287 0.001811407834 71% => OK
Determiners: 0.140283140283 0.113004496875 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.024453024453 0.0255425247493 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00772200772201 0.0127820249294 60% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4397.0 2731.13054187 161% => OK
No of words: 698.0 446.07635468 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2994269341 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.1400087186 4.57801047555 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388252148997 0.378187486979 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325214899713 0.287650121315 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240687679083 0.208842608468 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161891117479 0.135150697306 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93586673239 2.79052419416 105% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 207.018472906 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432664756447 0.469332199767 92% => OK
Word variations: 54.3895909999 52.1807786196 104% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.039408867 155% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5161290323 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2949111514 57.7814097925 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.838709677 141.986410481 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5161290323 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.709677419355 0.724660767414 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.58251231527 28% => OK
Readability: 55.0376190036 51.9672348444 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.66486486486 1.8405768891 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463149479507 0.441005458295 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141400993226 0.135418324435 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0780285161666 0.0829849096947 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569730745105 0.58762219726 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158189528756 0.147661913831 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208893212586 0.193483328276 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799720402098 0.0970749176394 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.620765688582 0.42659136922 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.044497626772 0.0774707102158 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37166858372 0.312017818177 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272398632617 0.0698173142475 39% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.33743842365 180% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.87684729064 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 6.46551724138 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 5.36822660099 186% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 14.657635468 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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