The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine.
"A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising executives according to the average number of hours they sleep per night showed an association between the amount of sleep the executives need and the success of their firms. Of the advertising firms studied, those whose executives reported needing no more than 6 hours of sleep per night had higher profit margins and faster growth. These results suggest that if a business wants to prosper, it should hire only people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The article shown in the business magazine have many flaws and many unstated question are there which are required to be answered before taking any decision regarding the hiring of the people.
The study rating has considered only "sleep hours of executives" as a factor for the success of the business. Clearly, number of sleep hours cannot be considered as a factor for the executives to be more intellectual and brilliant. Many other factors such as presence of mind, wittiness, etc plays a major role in the prosperity of the business. A person's decision during the most crucial time marks the success of his firms and to make such decision, it is necessary to be fresh and free of stress. Clearly, the company should consider various other factors to come to any conclusion.
According to the study, the have rated 300 executives according to the number of hours they sleep per night. The possibility of major number of successful executives sleeping less than 6 hours cannot be concluded by 300 ratings. The company's growth depends on several other factors then their executives number of sleep hour. A company becomes successful by the cooperation of its employees and the passion with which they work within the company. Higher profit margins and faster growth clearly comes out with the unique decision power of the executives of the company.
A report by WHO says that around 8 hours of sleep is required for the human brain to be fresh and lively. So, it doesn't depend on the number of hours but the mindset with which they works. According to the article, to prosper a business, it should hire people who need less than 6 hours of sleep per night. The IQ level varies from person to person and it should be considered as the major factor for the success of the business.
In sum, the report does not answer many unstated question and it should consider various other factor other than sleep hours per night for the executives. They should do a survey of the executives and ask them to rate themselves on major factor or by the highest authority in the business and then the business magazine should come to any conclusion regarding the success of their firms by executive's status.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26179245283 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.122641509434 0.15541462614 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10141509434 0.0836205057962 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0330188679245 0.0520304965353 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0353773584906 0.0272364105082 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134433962264 0.125424944231 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0377358490566 0.0416121511921 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48981758835 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330188679245 0.026700313972 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00235849056604 0.001811407834 130% => OK
Determiners: 0.117924528302 0.113004496875 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188679245283 0.0255425247493 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00943396226415 0.0127820249294 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2235.0 2731.13054187 82% => OK
No of words: 384.0 446.07635468 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8203125 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361979166667 0.378187486979 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234375 0.287650121315 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1640625 0.208842608468 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0989583333333 0.135150697306 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48981758835 2.79052419416 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 207.018472906 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.469332199767 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.7450711981 52.1807786196 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5882352941 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9867055837 57.7814097925 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.470588235 141.986410481 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.724660767414 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 46.0257352941 51.9672348444 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.27160493827 1.8405768891 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538018390191 0.441005458295 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14167198479 0.135418324435 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069699038407 0.0829849096947 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.641899156214 0.58762219726 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127548376638 0.147661913831 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273795814244 0.193483328276 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925486313964 0.0970749176394 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.509991009451 0.42659136922 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0735627469918 0.0774707102158 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394045125802 0.312017818177 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075167308144 0.0698173142475 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.33743842365 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 6.46551724138 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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