The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:
“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
In the letter to the editor of national aeronautics magazine, the writer mentions that the the recent success in the unmanned sapce research is much more better than the mann research. because the manned research has tons of risk and cost is higher than the unmanned research. Also, the writer denotes that the unmanned satellites are much more efiicient than the manned probes and satellites. The writer is primarily concered with human loss in the space and his ulimate goal is to support unmanned research in the space without any kind of ground research and evidence the writer has suggested these change in the space research programs.
To begin with, The writer suggests that the research in the space should be unmanned because manned research are more costlier than the unmanned research, and their is more risk factor in the manned probes. without any grounds and proof of the costing of a satellite and a research probec for manned research. The unmanned probes and satellites need lager amount of funding because their is ai system who works on the commands of human. so, it will need larger amount of equipments, sensors and communications system to stay connected with the earth. The humans first sent series satellites in space because to survey their surroundings and condition, so that they can easily measure out to take risk to send astronauts for research.
Next, The series of successful operation in the space by unmanned satellites, are controlled by the men on the earth. The scientiest who control the satellites and give it command to work in a certain manner. ultimately, the men who made the satellites is controlling them in the space and doing their research. so, man is indirectly connected with the space research.
The manned and unmanned research need lager amount of fundings for the research, but the manned research has larger positive side is the man who made the machine can repair the machine in the space but the machine it self can't do that. so if the machine of the system is got damaged in the space it is the direct loss of satellite in the space.
To conclude, On the basis of superfluous details the writer had suggested these changes in the space research and on these anecdotal evidences the space research can't be changed. The writer is concerned with the human loss in the space but he can't justify his perspective from this letter. The ai will only bring information as per his command. human are more efficient in the research in compare to the ai.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 429 350
No. of Characters: 2042 1500
No. of Different Words: 164 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.551 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.76 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.467 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.475 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.48 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.701 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.239 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the letter to the editor of national aeronautics magaz...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...tics magazine, the writer mentions that the the recent success in the unmanned sapce re...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...tics magazine, the writer mentions that the the recent success in the unmanned sapce re...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... in the unmanned sapce research is much more better than the mann research. because the man...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...uch more better than the mann research. because the manned research has tons of risk an...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...be unmanned because manned research are more costlier than the unmanned research, and their i...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ostlier than the unmanned research, and their is more risk factor in the manned probe...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
... more risk factor in the manned probes. without any grounds and proof of the costing of...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...es need lager amount of funding because their is ai system who works on the commands ...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...tem who works on the commands of human. so, it will need larger amount of equipmen...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'commands'?
Suggestion: commands
... who control the satellites and give it command to work in a certain manner. ultimately...
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Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ultimately
...it command to work in a certain manner. ultimately, the men who made the satellites is con...
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Line 9, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... in the space and doing their research. so, man is indirectly connected with the s...
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Line 11, column 215, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...he machine in the space but the machine it self cant do that. so if the machine of the ...
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Line 11, column 223, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ne in the space but the machine it self cant do that. so if the machine of the syste...
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Line 11, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e but the machine it self cant do that. so if the machine of the system is got dam...
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Line 11, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e but the machine it self cant do that. so if the machine of the system is got damage...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tellite in the space. To conclude, On the basis of superfluous details the ...
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Line 15, column 164, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... anecdotal evidences the space research cant be changed. The writer is concerned wit...
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Line 15, column 245, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...with the human loss in the space but he cant justify his perspective from this lette...
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Line 15, column 245, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...with the human loss in the space but he cant justify his perspective from this lette...
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Line 15, column 347, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...y bring information as per his command. human are more efficient in the research in c...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he research in compare to the ai.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2260.96107784 93% => OK
No of words: 429.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90442890443 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53423160089 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403263403263 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4291529928 57.8364921388 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.736842105 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235573724546 0.218282227539 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944698971455 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564035399914 0.0701772020484 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157403216633 0.128457276422 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446037005743 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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