The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company."According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any

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The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.

"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

The memo indicates the lowest sales and the increase in positive reviews of Super Screen-produced movies in the last year. The author concludes that it is because the public are unaware of high quality of Super Screen-produced movies, and then Super Screen-produced movies should be advertised. However, there are some questions which listed in the following and needed to be clarified before judging the recommendation.

First of all, the argument mentions that the fewest customers went to Super Screen-produced movies. Nevertheless, the number of Super Screen-produced movies in the last year remains unknown. It is possible that there only were two Super Screen-produced movies in the last year and eight Super Screen-produced movies in other years. The fewer customers might cause by fewer movies. Therefore, the author should provide the information about the exact number of Super Screen-produced movies run in the last year for a fair judgment of the recommendation.

Secondly, the writer contends that the positive reviews were inclined in the last year. Nonetheless, there is no obvious evidence demonstrating that the reviewers rated the movies high for their qualities. Probably, the reviewers are content with the theaters' services and food. Thus, there might be a doubt that which parts of the movies do the reviewers satisfy with. It would be more clear that if the writer offers more accurate information about the reviewers' thoughts to the movies.

Finally, the writer asserts that allotting a higher budget could reach the awareness of the public and then solve the few customers problem for Super Screen-produced movies. Notwithstanding, there is insufficient information to prove that the advertisement could efficiently grab people's attention. Perhaps, there are many other methods to catch people's eyes, such as providing a discount, affording free beverage, and improving the hygiene standard of the theater. Hence, the advertisement might not be the best and only way to bolster the sales of the movies.

To sum up, there is some doubt about the information which is demonstrated in the argument. Until the questions about the number of the movies, the pleasant part of the movies, and the practical means to grab the public attention, are answered, the recommendation could not be well assessed.

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argument 1 -- not OK. two points:

first, Suppose there are 10 movies for last year and other years always. and in the last year, the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies (suppose only two movies)actually increased, but totally, the percentage may decrease.

second, suppose the percentage of positive reviews increase for all movies (10 movies), but still could be less customers.

argument 2 -- not OK. read the prompt:

Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available.

maybe the public knows the movies very well, but they watch online or rent DVD instead.

argument 3 -- OK
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