Since its opening in Collegeville twenty years ago, Monarch Books has developed a large customer base due to its reader-friendly atmosphere and wide selection of books on all subjects. Last month, Book and Bean, a combination bookstore and coffee shop, announced its intention to open a Collegeville store. Monarch Books should open its own in-store café in the space currently devoted to children's books. Given recent national census data indicating a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten, sales of children's books are likely to decline. By replacing its children's books section with a café, Monarch Books can increase profits and ward off competition from Book and Bean
The business manager argues that monarch books should open its own in-store café taking up the place where currently presents children’s books. To justify this claim, the author points out that the decline in the percentage of the children and the competing company’s tendency to open a store do make a great difference on the decision. However, some specific proofs should be provided to better evaluate the argument.
The manager concludes that an in-store café should be open for the simple reason that book and bean, a combination bookstore and coffee shop, announced its attention to o...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 537 350
No. of Characters: 2601 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.814 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.844 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.699 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 142 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.998 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.555 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ctually be willing to be in on the act? even though the store which is the combinati...
^^^^
Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...narch books know the result in advance? there will be a huge uncertainty between open...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
... where sells children's books now. although it seems a significant reduction on the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...untry stand for the small collegeville. even if there might be a relationship betwee...
^^^^
Line 10, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Profitability
... bean. Yet this is not always the case. profitability is restricted by both revenue and expen...
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Line 10, column 291, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...restricted by both revenue and expense. if the company try to commence a new busin...
^^
Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
..., the conclusion is not well-supported. although the argument and the assumption might b...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.9520958084 170% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 16.3942115768 159% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2711.0 2260.96107784 120% => OK
No of words: 537.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04841713222 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91467504799 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 204.123752495 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476722532588 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 705.55239521 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0452286106 57.8364921388 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.958333333 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54166666667 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209246729212 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628240592377 0.0743258471296 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800395462126 0.0701772020484 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120474145358 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611127087603 0.0628817314937 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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