Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Opening an outlet is not an easy dicision to make by any company so it must be made judiciously.The argument above is totally flawed due to it'many vague considerations as discussed below.
Nauure's Way franchise assumption of opening the new store in the city of Plainsville is totally superflawed as it is assuming that it will be very successful because it consideres it's citizens to be leading healthy lives that is claarly not the base in assuming that they will consume the health food and other health related products. Most people are healthy in the town because of healthy eating habits, like fruits, green leafy veggies, proper exercises like jogging, swimming or many kinds of yoga etc. There might be a possibility that the citizens of this town are against notion of the health related products as they may cause various harmful side effects.However, in order to achieve the goal of profitable sales of it's products the franchise must itself conduct the survey regarding the future likelihood of bring successful or not that will rather better option than trusting some random survey.
Further the franchise is ambiguously considering the untrusted statistics of the other merchant about that the sales of the sports clothing and shoes are at all time high.There might be a festive season with stores offering heavy discounts and hence greatly affecting the sales.Assuming this notion is intself very flawed and might not be even true.This also points out that the helath club also has more members than ever but still as stated above there is no clear notion of the surety that these people will use these health related products or not.
Schoolchildern on the other hand are required to participate in the fitness program, however this franchise tirelessly considers them as target customers also that's too ambiguous as these childern's parents might not be in favour of consumption of the health products at such an early stage maybe due to their various side effects.Hence the franchise can never be sure about their outlet will be profitabe or not considering their flawed justification on the opening of an outlet.
In conclusion I want to point out that in order to open any outlet in any town one must be aware about it's customers attitude about the particular products that it has to offer and must not rely on some untrusted survey.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Opening an outlet is not an easy dicision to make by any company so it must be made judiciously.The argument above is totally flawed due to it'many vague considerations as discussed below.
Error: dicision Suggestion: division
Sentence: Nauure's Way franchise assumption of opening the new store in the city of Plainsville is totally superflawed as it is assuming that it will be very successful because it consideres it's citizens to be leading healthy lives that is claarly not the base in assuming that they will consume the health food and other health related products.
Error: consideres Suggestion: considers
Error: claarly Suggestion: clearly
Error: superflawed Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Further the franchise is ambiguously considering the untrusted statistics of the other merchant about that the sales of the sports clothing and shoes are at all time high.There might be a festive season with stores offering heavy discounts and hence greatly affecting the sales.Assuming this notion is intself very flawed and might not be even true.This also points out that the helath club also has more members than ever but still as stated above there is no clear notion of the surety that these
Error: helath Suggestion: health
Error: untrusted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: intself Suggestion: itself
Sentence: Schoolchildern on the other hand are required to participate in the fitness program, however this franchise tirelessly considers them as target customers also that's too ambiguous as these childern's parents might not be in favour of consumption of the health products at such an early stage maybe due to their various side effects.Hence the franchise can never be sure about their outlet will be profitabe or not considering their flawed justification on the opening of an outlet.
Error: profitabe Suggestion: profitable
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flaws:
also need to argue:
The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1943 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.845 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.516 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 28.576 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.415 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.747 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... company so it must be made judiciously.The argument above is totally flawed due to...
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Suggestion:
...ing, swimming or many kinds of yoga etc. There might be a possibility that the ci...
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Suggestion: However
... may cause various harmful side effects.However, in order to achieve the goal of profit...
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: Assuming
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Suggestion: This
... very flawed and might not be even true.This also points out that the helath club al...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this health' or 'these healths'?
Suggestion: this health; these healths
...f the surety that these people will use these health related products or not. Schoolchild...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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...considers them as target customers also thats too ambiguous as these childerns parent...
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Suggestion: Hence
...maybe due to their various side effects.Hence the franchise can never be sure about t...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...maybe due to their various side effects.Hence the franchise can never be sure about t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... customers attitude about the particular products that it has to offer and must n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00253807107 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71788069404 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.8473053892 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.381165405 57.8364921388 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.571428571 119.503703932 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.2857142857 23.324526521 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 5.70786347227 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253003721431 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117403093358 0.0743258471296 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852663231039 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124739337056 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072981598643 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 14.3799401198 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 48.3550499002 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.32208582834 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 98.500998004 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 11.1389221557 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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