Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives,and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument presents a case for the potential success of Nature’s Way’s new store in Plainsville citing observations from the success of its stores in other areas. Itt cites the healthy lifestyle of residents of those areas as the reason behind their success and concludes the same for Plainsville, along with a number of assumptions about Plainsville which require more information to be validated.
The first assumption is the success factor behind Nature’s Way’s other stores itself. The argument assumes that there is a causal relationship between the healthy lifestyle of people and t...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 32 15
No. of Words: 819 350
No. of Characters: 4193 1500
No. of Different Words: 319 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.12 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.764 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 328 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 243 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 176 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 110 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.594 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.915 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.475 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...t into motion because of marketing or a sports event driving mass frenzy. All of this ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 12.9520958084 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 29.0 11.1786427146 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 28.8173652695 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 116.0 55.5748502994 209% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4317.0 2260.96107784 191% => OK
No of words: 818.0 441.139720559 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27750611247 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.34796216256 4.56307096286 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91644538104 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 204.123752495 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398533007335 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1325.7 705.55239521 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 17.0 8.76447105788 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 19.7664670659 162% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0425126279 57.8364921388 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.90625 119.503703932 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90625 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.20758483034 256% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207826970146 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063737501586 0.0743258471296 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554082827384 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127922061972 0.128457276422 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437947669307 0.0628817314937 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.5979740519 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 98.500998004 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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