SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
The conclusion of argument fails to mention the several aspect on the basis in which the evidence has drawn it is clear that there needs to be more than cheaper place to have a headquarters as the it is the heardquarters of a company it should accessible to remaining braches which it clearly failed to mention and company just determined that workers prefer but they failed to asked there employers where they may me reject the proposal.
Firstly the company failed takes all aspects into the consideration as there employers may well settled in that area and didn’t want move there as there will not interested to move to another place which is new for them and also as it is headquarters it should be accessible. To all other branch to connect and as its is moving to non urban it will difficult to get the public transport than the urban area as it is well developed it is easy to access to public transport.
Secondly the company determined that there employers prefer to live in area that is not urban . as the company can’t assumes what there employers think instated they can take a poll which they can consider with the highest percent of what people choose this is the best way to satisfies the employees and also as every one will prefer to live in the urban rather than non urban because they can get access to all they need in one place which easy to get access .
Finally the stated non urban safer and cheaper to live but it failed to mention that when they employers move there they need to rent or buy a house which is not cheap to do so and buy this you can’t come to conclude urban is not saver or cheap to live .
To conclude the company failed take the all aspects into consideration what is best for the company and best for its employers more over they didn’t even ask the employers which is not the right thing to do .
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1488 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.351 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.313 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 57 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.823 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.528 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.912 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.25 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of argument fails to mention the several aspect on the basis in which the evidenc...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...cheaper place to have a headquarters as the it is the heardquarters of a company it sh...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompany it should accessible to remaining braches which it clearly failed to menti...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s which it clearly failed to mention and company just determined that workers pre...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...pos;t want move there as there will not interested to move to another place which is new f...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... company determined that there employers prefer to live in area that is not urban...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...prefer to live in area that is not urban . as the company can't assumes what...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...fer to live in area that is not urban . as the company can't assumes what th...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is not urban . as the company can't assumes what there employers think insta...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the best way to satisfies the employees and also as every one will prefer to liv...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed in one place which easy to get access . Finally the stated non urban safer an...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... one place which easy to get access . Finally the stated non urban safer and cheaper ...
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Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...buy this you can't come to conclude urban is not saver or cheap to live . ...
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Line 9, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ude urban is not saver or cheap to live . To conclude the company failed take t...
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Line 11, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the all aspects into consideration what is best for the company and best for its...
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Line 11, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oyers which is not the right thing to do .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50882352941 5.12650576532 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42853332995 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 204.123752495 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.8473053892 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.106030912 57.8364921388 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.0 119.503703932 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.5714285714 23.324526521 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.70786347227 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0676349177456 0.218282227539 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408727613228 0.0743258471296 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161366555791 0.0701772020484 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433746993776 0.128457276422 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219136210339 0.0628817314937 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 14.3799401198 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 48.3550499002 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 12.197005988 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 12.3882235529 218% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.1389221557 190% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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