Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The reason of the argument relies on the assumption for which there no is clear evidience there are lot of bussiness and goverments which are running successfully in there field eventhough the leaders of these business, politics, education, government are in there power more than five years so the aasumption mention above is irrelevent and unbiased
firstly the business and the goverment or any things that matters needs a lot of experiences and a lot of knowledge about the field and also the people those in people needs to find there successers and traines them to the every situation that he may face them so that he makes the right steps on the gowth of the bussiness or goverment we have see a lot companys or goverment these were failed badly that there successers are not up to marks so they take wrong steps that causes thedown fall of the company or the goverment
secondly no business, politics, education, government will revitalization through just new leadership it need lot more than the new leader he needs to understand the situation and there company policy there employers and the steps he needs to take when the difficult times and he need lead them by any situation it will come just by new leadership it need much more than that . those who are in the power should find the successer and train them to be the best in any situation that he may face rather than just step down after five years of time period
finally in the bussiness, politics, education, government need there present leaders to train there successers rather than just steping down in five years they need to train them to lead the company in any stituation
In conclusion the essumption made by the author is irrelavent that the business, politics, education, government needs more than a new leadership to revitalization they need vision they need the leader how needs understand every situation to take the goverment or company farword
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mention above is irrelevent and unbiased firstly the business and the goverment o...
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...h of the bussiness or goverment we have see a lot companys or goverment these were ...
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...own fall of the company or the goverment secondly no business, politics, educatio...
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...l of the company or the goverment secondly no business, politics, education, gover...
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...tep down after five years of time period finally in the bussiness, politics, educ...
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...em to lead the company in any stituation In conclusion the essumption made by the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89123867069 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64362958804 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404833836858 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.2370786517 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 165.0 23.0359550562 716% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 290.5 60.3974514979 481% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 809.5 118.986275619 680% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 165.5 23.4991977007 704% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 37.5 5.21951772744 718% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248220750083 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216204536637 0.0831039109588 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00569509329085 0.0758088955206 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154854871696 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581666033596 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 84.4 14.1392134831 597% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -87.54 48.8420337079 -179% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 66.5 12.1743820225 546% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.01 8.38706741573 167% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 68.0 11.2143820225 606% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.7820224719 467% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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