A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be addressed in order to decide whether the conclusion and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to the questions would help to evaluate the conclusion.
As there is only one restaurant which services specfic seafoods so that the who ever wants to eat the seafood should come to bay city restaurants but there are not other restaurants that shows no interest to serve to seafood shows that there are not many people in the city interest in the city to eat the seafood the place in which the restaurant help them to attract the people to the restaurant and it also quit popular arount area as it is only seafood restaurant
As in the city more two income families they will eat a lot of food but it doesn't mean that they will eat in the bay city restaurant but it is only seafood restaurant around the area so lot of people will come and try various seafood that helps the restaurant to get the profits and as there is one restaurant which means there are less avaliable of seaproducts around the area so the how willing to eat the sea food should come here only as there is no other restaurant .
As there are alot of people who are more concern of eating a lot of healthyfood which they definetly try to eat a lot of spicifics sea food so that to take good care of there health so by opening a new restaurant will denitely get quite popular and profitable because there is only one restaurant that service people will difinetly try the new restaurant so it will quite popular.
in conclude the openly a new restaurant which has less compitation and also there are a lot of two income people who are mostly eat outside food and prefer to eat healthyfood will defintly tryout the new restaurant which helps the restaurant quit popular and profitable.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 15
No. of Words: 294 350
No. of Characters: 1296 1500
No. of Different Words: 102 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.141 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.408 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.419 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 73.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.797 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.718 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.423 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... to attract the people to the restaurant and it also quit popular arount area as ...
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...nt area as it is only seafood restaurant As in the city more two income families ...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lies they will eat a lot of food but it doesnt mean that they will eat in the bay city...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...iable of seaproducts around the area so the how willing to eat the sea food should come...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ere only as there is no other restaurant . As there are alot of people who ar...
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... as there is no other restaurant . As there are alot of people who are more ...
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... As there are alot of people who are more concern of eating a lot of healthyf...
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...staurant so it will quite popular. in conclude the openly a new restaurant wh...
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Line 13, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...n and also there are a lot of two income people who are mostly eat outside food a...
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Line 13, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eaten'.
Suggestion: eaten
...ot of two income people who are mostly eat outside food and prefer to eat healthyf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 293.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50511945392 5.12650576532 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43384638357 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.351535836177 0.468620217663 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 705.55239521 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 19.7664670659 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 22.8473053892 425% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 296.166619771 57.8364921388 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 440.0 119.503703932 368% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.6666666667 23.324526521 419% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224623610603 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146805475198 0.0743258471296 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103014102571 0.0701772020484 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166687800086 0.128457276422 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103313395918 0.0628817314937 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.6 14.3799401198 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 48.3550499002 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.197005988 318% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.06 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32208582834 123% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 98.500998004 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 12.3882235529 412% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 11.1389221557 366% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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