Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Can an ancient historic analysis be simply concluded with or without the presence of a boat?The argument given is about the issues related to the findings of origin of the Woven baskets.With this clear,We can interpret the result.But,more proofs are needed and the given statement is amateur to find the uniqueness of Palean baskets.
First and foremost,if what they say is true,then it is not clear why they say so.Baskets woven with different materials won't be subjected to a particular place.Material being not considered and pattern given importance at first place is a problem and questionable.As there are no enough information about prehostoric matters,a detailed analysis should be done rather than simple assumption.
Secondly,Palean boats considered as primary evidence might not be unique.How is it possible to determine the result with no or less unique evidence which will cause in flaws in the result?Moreover,the Brim river, being the separator of Palaea and Lithos villages,might not be as ancient or prehistoric as the villages.
Geological and natural features are considered permanent.But,it's perennial characteristics are doubtable when prehistoric ages are taken into account.As we all know,for example,the present India is the one which got seperated from present australia and joined with asain continent over centuries ago.If plate tectonics can influence such a massive landmass,Why not the Brim river?Deep and broad brim river could have been resulted from the tectonic movement itself. The terms 'prehistoric' and 'ancient' alone is not enough for large scope determination.Furthermore,the representation of the villages before any natural or geographic changes are not known.We know that the areas weren't much divided at ancient times.So,the possibility of the two villages been named one and same practices followed all over similarly is more. Geotechnical evidences can be of more help but are not provided in the statement.With geotechnical evidences and reports,the age of the river,the soil changes,consolidation changes and more can be found and will be of much help.
The argument lacks more details which is the primary requirement of any argument.With less proofs and assumptions,it is possible to say that it might not have been uniquely Palean but also not possible.From my interpolation,it is also possible that it has single origin from both villages if joint.More evidences are required for argument to be undoubtable and unquestionable.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: First and foremost,if what they say is true,then it is not clear why they say so.Baskets woven with different materials won't be subjected to a particular place.Material being not considered and pattern given importance at first place is a problem and questionable.As there are no enough information about prehostoric matters,a detailed analysis should be done rather than simple assumption.
Error: prehostoric Suggestion: prehistoric
Sentence: Geological and natural features are considered permanent.But,it's perennial characteristics are doubtable when prehistoric ages are taken into account.As we all know,for example,the present India is the one which got seperated from present australia and joined with asain continent over centuries ago.If plate tectonics can influence such a massive landmass,Why not the Brim river?Deep and broad brim river could have been resulted from the tectonic movement itself.
Error: seperated Suggestion: separated
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 416 350
No. of Characters: 2054 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.516 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.938 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.753 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 59.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.752 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.838 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 2260.96107784 93% => OK
No of words: 376.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6170212766 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62684835255 2.78398813304 130% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 705.55239521 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2849560164 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.714285714 119.503703932 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.7142857143 23.324526521 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.70786347227 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.25449101796 780% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908043169599 0.218282227539 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438302978225 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217198249066 0.0701772020484 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484368759559 0.128457276422 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215227251835 0.0628817314937 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 14.3799401198 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.76 48.3550499002 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.1628742515 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 12.197005988 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.5979740519 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.32208582834 133% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 12.3882235529 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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