Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own experience.
The contrasting beliefs of people often happen and I think that both parents and school members are equally responsible for educating children about socialization.
Considering the belief of people who think school is the place for children to learn manners, I think school is the place where children practically get to mingle with others as a lot of interactions take place there. As people are good at learning from others, there are chances for children to gain some good behavioral knowledge from their friends and teachers in school. When children with bad characters are punished or warned in school, other children will perceive from that act and develop the conscience. Or else, a reward to a best, wise child might increase the impulses of other children to act in the right direction.
As children learn from other children in school, it takes at least one kid's parent's effort to make their child set an example for other children. It all starts at home and continues in school. If parents use abusive language or talk about negative matters in front of the children at home, kids will also develop those characters unknowingly. For example, my sister's son, who recently went to school for just kinder garden, has learned to use colloquial words from his friends who learned that from their parents. When he uses it on elders, it sounds disrespectful. It was all because of that one parent who failed to teach his child. But, as my sister and school equally took up the job and continuously advised my nephew against it, he is not behaving badly now.
In conclusion, it takes both parents and schools effort to make a child become responsible and make a child mix socially with better manners. The kid's actions in both school and while with parents are interrelated. So, neither parents nor school can do it separately as people believe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'happen'.
Suggestion: often happen
The contrasting beliefs of people are happen often and I think that both parents and schoo...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...elop a conscience. Or else, a reward to a best, wise child might increase the imp...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'kid'.
Suggestion: kid
...cially with better manners. The actions kids do in both school and while with parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87697160883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60234967395 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3415625178 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.066666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254242520201 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921230849902 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672714442022 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174380159823 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049349545157 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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