Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Events that seems to be very improbable like the woven baskets founded in Palea and Lithos are more common than it apears. In history books, there are inumerous cases, such as the construction of pyramids from the Egipts and the Mayans or the rupestric paints found in America and Asia dating from the same century.
The humanity is always developping, in the past, even the most distant tribes might discovered the fire by your own manner. So, in terms of evaluation of the woven baskets, is importante to know the people history and development.
As is informed, the village of Palea and Lithos are close to each other, separed only by the Brim River. In some time of the history, probably these two people came from the same society, that develop your unique cultures and subsitency manner for living. Based in this fact, the use of the woven (or some ancient type, like bamboo fibers) might be an tecnology developed by the ancient people.
After the separation of the Paleans and the Litheans, the culture of creating woven stuff must remains and to prove that fact, further discoveries must be analysed for determining if the Litheans also have the tools to create woven. Showing that the manufacturing of woven baskests came from the ancienct people that generated the Paleans and Litheans.
Another explanation is that the river, in some time of history, could be iced by the glacial era or drained by the lack of rains. So the Pelean people might be able to cross the Brim Riber and founded the Lithos village, giving to the Litheans people a woven basket as a gift or even that they lost their baskets during the journey, hence the origin of the artifact in the Lithos village.
In conclusion, the prehistoric era is very long, at a lot of coincidences could be happened in other to bring the Palean’s basket to the Lithos village. So, at this time, there is not a strenth evidence that could prove this fact, only assumptions can be made in order to given theory about this unkowed part of the human’s history.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The humanity is always developping, in the past, even the most distant tribes might discovered the fire by your own manner.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to might and discovered
Sentence: So, in terms of evaluation of the woven baskets, is importante to know the people history and development.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and history
Sentence: After the separation of the Paleans and the Litheans, the culture of creating woven stuff must remains and to prove that fact, further discoveries must be analysed for determining if the Litheans also have the tools to create woven.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to must and remains
Sentence: So, at this time, there is not a strenth evidence that could prove this fact, only assumptions can be made in order to given theory about this unkowed part of the human's history.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and given
Sentence: Events that seems to be very improbable like the woven baskets founded in Palea and Lithos are more common than it apears.
Error: apears Suggestion: appears
Sentence: In history books, there are inumerous cases, such as the construction of pyramids from the Egipts and the Mayans or the rupestric paints found in America and Asia dating from the same century.
Error: rupestric Suggestion: rustic
Error: inumerous Suggestion: numerous
Sentence: The humanity is always developping, in the past, even the most distant tribes might discovered the fire by your own manner.
Error: developping Suggestion: developing
Sentence: So, in terms of evaluation of the woven baskets, is importante to know the people history and development.
Error: importante Suggestion: important
Sentence: As is informed, the village of Palea and Lithos are close to each other, separed only by the Brim River.
Error: separed Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In some time of the history, probably these two people came from the same society, that develop your unique cultures and subsitency manner for living.
Error: subsitency Suggestion: subsistence
Sentence: Based in this fact, the use of the woven or some ancient type, like bamboo fibers might be an tecnology developed by the ancient people.
Error: tecnology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: After the separation of the Paleans and the Litheans, the culture of creating woven stuff must remains and to prove that fact, further discoveries must be analysed for determining if the Litheans also have the tools to create woven.
Error: analysed Suggestion: analyzed
Sentence: Showing that the manufacturing of woven baskests came from the ancienct people that generated the Paleans and Litheans.
Error: baskests Suggestion: baskets
Error: ancienct Suggestion: ancient
Sentence: So, at this time, there is not a strenth evidence that could prove this fact, only assumptions can be made in order to given theory about this unkowed part of the human's history.
Error: unkowed Suggestion: snowed
Error: strenth Suggestion: strength
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1625 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.59 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.347 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.505 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cient type, like bamboo fibers might be an tecnology developed by the ancient peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 354.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75423728814 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48800146654 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.22255489022 237% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5950704658 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.461538462 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 23.324526521 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135923377652 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478028962501 0.0743258471296 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368036564939 0.0701772020484 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654958796741 0.128457276422 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252592555988 0.0628817314937 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 98.500998004 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.