2. To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d

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2. To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Although some claim that major cities should be studied in advance to understand their community's important features, this essay will contend that both cities and a society's unique characteristics should be studied at the same time to learn about the society. Cities and their within society is interrelated back and forth, not one being superior in stance to the other.

Admittedly, there are societies that represent its major cities because those societies are eventually located inside each city. Societies where the atmosphere is very hectic due to full of workaholics could be a representative of a city which has such high buildings. For example, a small society in JP Morgan in New York is composed of early-bird workers due to an every early morning meeting with the CEO. To get to acknowledge the society, we could study New York first. Since New York is known to be where people with very busy lifestyle thrives, we could presume that the little society located inside the JP Morgan in New York. Similarly, a student could have been dispelled from his or her school due to bullying or hurting others physically and has to move to another school outside the city. To understand this kind of student's eviction from the school, one could study its city's law regarding school. As discussed above, any feats that a society has could be assumed from studying its city first.

However, logically speaking, each society also has its own unique features that are not related to its cities. The representative example for this is the Indians residing in New Mexico. The Indian society is very firm which is not malleable to the outside of their community. They stick to their own kind of lifestyles; such as clothing or eating habits. If we study New Mexico's major cities, we could acknowledge the fact that it has been affected hugely by Mexico and it is also full of Spanish. So, we could assume that the societies in New Mexico also features that kind of characteristics. However, the Indian society is the very one that does not let those New Mexico features interrupt and change their own style.

Also, if a very specific society is to be mentioned, it is very hard to assume from the city's major characteristics. For instance, a society inside a JP Morgan,in New York, which enjoys playing soccer every day after work is far from New York's atmosphere. If a stranger sees the society, from the outside, playing soccer everyday, that person would presume that the people are enjoying their life to the fullest with no stress. However, that fact is hard to be inferred just by looking at New York.

Therefore, it is logical to say that cities can represent the within societies' characteristics and, simultaneously, a specific kind of society that is far from the cities' main atmosphere should be seen separately from the city. Both ways are admitted to view societies.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233333333333 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.168518518519 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777777777778 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0648148148148 0.0497285424764 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0425925925926 0.0444667217837 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116666666667 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0406280797675 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68463777749 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388888888889 0.030933414821 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0981481481481 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0259259259259 0.0249443105267 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0148568991511 112% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2886.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 489.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9018404908 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345603271984 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251533742331 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161554192229 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100204498978 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68463777749 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453987730061 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.5920361064 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2608695652 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3270402499 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.47826087 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2608695652 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.674092028746 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 46.4142437983 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.46979865772 1.64882698954 89% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373930698128 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12508344701 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.08326365531 0.077325440228 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503217451494 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153921720566 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151251501704 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705144156151 0.0892212321368 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377862132051 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0636617804442 0.0692045440612 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268921582282 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338083166298 0.0653680567796 52% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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flaws:
The essay is talking about 'Cities and their within communities'

but the topic is about 'major cities' or 'non major cities, suburban and rural areas...'

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suggestions:

A. Major cities used to be the cultural centers of a society.

B. Nowadays, however, due to the influence of globalization, major cities throughout the world look more or less the same.

C. By contrast, the suburban and rural areas of a society maintain more of its cultural tradition.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 490 350
No. of Characters: 2337 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.705 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.769 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.595 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.304 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.953 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.652 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5