6. Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
The above lines stating that a society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the due to the result of human activities is a very subjective topic to be discussed. Rapid urbanization and industrialization over the past centuries has been both a boom and bane to the living beings on Planet Earth. The advent of internet and the uptick of technology has improved the lives of humans being on a large basis thereby making the world a better place for them to satisify their multiple desires. The aftermath of the World Wars in the mid 90's had left an undelible mark on the human civilization, where most of the countries have plunged down to bitter poverty and people accross the globe have been hit by various life threatening epidemics back then.
Industrial Revolution is considered as a blessing to the human civilization where a positive vibe has been created amongst the people which drove them to work zealously towards the welfare of their countries and the world in entirety. This has lead to rapid population growth across the world thereby leading to the rise of cities and metropolises in the form of concrete jungles. Even though Industrial Revolution has completely changed the complexion of the world at that time, it had a negative backdrop to it as well. The ever growing population of the humans had lead to their intervention into the wild which had adversely affected the the terrestrial and aquatic life on Earth.
Increased deforestation and overgrazing resulted in wiping out thousand of hectares of land thereby affecting the natural habitat of the animals. The recent forest fires that have happened in the Amazon forests had completely destroyed the habitat to many species leading to thir extinction. The cause behind such horrifying forest fires arose due to large scale deforestation and over utilization of the forest land for human need. Such human negelct towards the wildlife had even lead to extinction of many species accross the world.
Apart from this, one of the ugliest acts include animal poaching and hunting where wild animals are hunt down on a regular basis. Rhinos for their horns, elephants for their tusks, snakes for thier skin, and sheep for their fur are some of the examples where human greed has almost destroyed the natural habitat for these animals. The White Rhino which was very frequent back then has gone into complete extinction in the recent times. The reason being an incessant rate of hunting down these creatures for human greed. Additionally, the human intervention on aquatic life had been worsening day by day. The Oil Spills from the ships and dumping of plastic and other radioactive material into the water bodies have completely destroyed the aquatic wildlife on a large scale. We human beings must take the blame for such crude beahviour towards the wildlife and them facing such extinction.
This human nature towards wild life has been rampant for quite long and need to be imepeded. In order to protect the wild life from facing such extinction, various wildlife conservation programs have to be conducted advocating the conservation and preservation of wild animals thereby preventing any such animals from facing extinction. Endangered species accross the planet have to be taken utmost care by the wildlife activists and must ensure proper living conditions to these species. The society must play a vital role in supporting such casues which involve animal conservation practices with an effort to save the imperiled species into extinction.
In conclusion, human activites for quite a long time has been affecting the wildlife on a large scale and the society must encourage people in particiapting in various animal conservation activities with an effort to save any endangered species that might face extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...o the wild which had adversely affected the the terrestrial and aquatic life on Earth. ...
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Suggestion: a thousand
... and overgrazing resulted in wiping out thousand of hectares of land thereby affecting t...
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Suggestion: leaded; led
...n negelct towards the wildlife had even lead to extinction of many species accross t...
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Suggestion: some
...thier skin, and sheep for their fur are some of the examples where human greed has almost d...
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Suggestion:
...cating the conservation and preservation of wild animals thereby preventing any s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3249.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 632.0 442.535393258 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14082278481 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01394158123 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70695248058 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45253164557 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1019.7 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8290600729 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.375 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226105054945 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699240008212 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128022187814 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134339574833 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972946754672 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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